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The Village of Trill

Jack and Jill went up the hill

This was never in dispute

It was how Jack fell down

With severe lacerations to his crown

That the jury had to conclude

Jill had a bun in the oven

The news was all over town

The bakers' wife was aghast

Her husband and his shady past

He liked a cream tart

Though, when cautioned down the red-light district

Cream was never mentioned in the Constables statement

Back to that ill-fated day on the hill

Jill says Jack was going down, on her

He was certainly on the edge

A couple walking their dog, state the baker was on the ledge

This was later dismissed when the couple admitted they didn’t have a dog

This was light relief for the jury in this sorry affair

Mrs Black didn’t turn up to church on Sunday

The stand in vicar didn’t know this, being new

All hell broke loose as the witness swore

Jill gave birth on the floor

A black child appeared

There was uproar

The baker shouted to his wife, with a frown

Three women stood up

So he sat down

They all turned to the bench

The Judge was holding his gavel

Somewhat in despair

DNA later found traces of poor Jacks hair

The Judge was taken down, mumbling

She said she was on the pill, Jill

That was the end of this sorry tale

Though the papers ran amok

Mondays headline read

Jack and Jill went up the hill, with the folks of Trill for an orgy and thrill

But things got out of hand

The Judge saw red, and whacked Jack dead

And they all came tumbling after.

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Date: 11/22/2024 11:21:00 AM
Oh my gosh. What a tall tale. Congrats on your big win, Paul
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/23/2024 5:23:00 AM
Certainly not one for the kids. lol
Date: 11/19/2024 12:18:00 AM
Quite an interesting story, and a fun read. Congratulations on your win Paul. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/19/2024 9:21:00 AM
The pail of water was always a disguise to throw people. lol
Date: 11/18/2024 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write/story. Did I hear Jack will be back??? Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/19/2024 9:22:00 AM
Only if he's reincarnated. lol
Date: 11/18/2024 1:41:00 AM
I loved this, Paul. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie
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Paul Bell
Date: 11/18/2024 8:40:00 AM
Something tells me, Jack will be back.

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