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The Victorious Old

They win not by victory o'er their enemies, for their enemies are invincible, yet they fight: aging can be resisted, hemmed in for a time, but its rolling is relentless, thinning the skin, shrinking the brain, thickening the arteries.... They are partisans, the victorious old, fighting, alone, a relentless guerilla war against one enemy, Old Age, who takes everyone prisoner, if they wait long enough, while the other foe, their last enemy, takes no prisoners at all.... And this final and most heartless enemy? Death always wins, there are no exceptions, but the victorious old give it no joy-- some even smile at Mr. Death, the light in their eyes still burning as their souls sense the oncoming freedom, the smell of Heaven-- and Death, never happy, sulks away....

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Date: 5/17/2021 6:33:00 PM
Great metaphors in this descriptive write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/20/2021 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Kim, go with God always!
Date: 5/17/2021 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/20/2021 12:23:00 PM
Thanks!!!
Date: 8/2/2020 9:08:00 AM
Perceptive, honest and wise words, Len. The last line is a ‘killer’!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/3/2020 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Geoff-- there must be some upside to getting old, even if it's only writing a poem....
Date: 7/28/2020 12:45:00 PM
Such powerful words of wisdom! Congratulations on your win :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/29/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi
Date: 7/26/2020 9:07:00 PM
Loved this!;) congrats on your win!:)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/27/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Brenda!

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