The Victorious Old

They win not by victory o'er their enemies,
for their enemies are invincible, yet they fight:
aging can be resisted, hemmed in for a time,
but its rolling is relentless, thinning the skin,
shrinking the brain, thickening the arteries....

They are partisans, the victorious old, 
fighting, alone, a relentless guerilla war
against one enemy, Old Age, who takes
everyone prisoner, if they wait long enough,
while the other foe, their last enemy, 
takes no prisoners at all....

And this final and most heartless enemy?
Death always wins, there are no exceptions,
but the victorious old give it no joy--
some even smile at Mr. Death, the light in
their eyes still burning as their souls sense
the oncoming freedom, the smell of Heaven--

and Death, never happy, sulks away....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Merryman Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Great metaphors in this descriptive write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Carber Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Kim, go with God always!
Alex Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thanks!!!
Brewer Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Perceptive, honest and wise words, Len. The last line is a ‘killer’!
Carber Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Geoff-- there must be some upside to getting old, even if it's only writing a poem....
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 12:45 PM
Such powerful words of wisdom! Congratulations on your win :)
Carber Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Thank you, Aditi
Chiri Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Loved this!;) congrats on your win!:)
Carber Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Thanks Brenda!
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