Notes About The Poem
I beleive the term here highlights Gods
Awareness and notation of war and its
Enablers.'
The victive of God '
In consternation i will employ some letters
That read as ' victive ' it
has sprung in my mind.. to use as an acusative I need to quantify.?
To express my disgust.' At lifes dark yet lucrative 'wethers' the undefined promises
Or hints if you will.? Or must' of life improvements it
Seens all hog swill.' From the killing of Able
To carthages fall in every conflict
( oxymoronica ) the edge we walk..above the
Steep falls, the opposites of safety sometines not far away.' From a wasteland of deprivation of extreme..Fear driven by depravity i must say, where knuckles clench tightly to a
blanket old and worn, children hold
as 'a sheild ' against the hum of shrapnel borne.' Upon a gust of air
Hot fron a science deeply cold.' Driven by a profit line, and political speeches bold, i hear of 'profitless investments?' In a place called Gaza..As a point.' Yet I am sure there are accounts that would tell other.' Banking ones sole or joint, There seems to be ( a fault? ) the type found in geology, which shows its telltale lines.' That we may read of true history; in various
Strata and sediments fine..In my mind
I see a mirror ( i see its always there
in every war!) Its dead central in every battlefield.'
Yet never cracks, shatters, or deforms, at all
of this I am assured.' Its purpose is to
reflect the beauty of Gods work.' Yet
it reflects; also the vanity of selfish souless jerks.' The ones that sit on velvet chairs, that quaff the
Sack and wine..Who are there to fund the charitys..And desreuction irs all combined.'
While helpless people cannot rest.' Who dig through rubble to find.' Another familiy
Member, quite human we should mind.' While the mirrors are recieving every glint
And blast, for His recordings are a greater
Reality of the technical devices, humans use yet
Unto eternity they will certainly, not last !
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