~4th Place~ Premiere Contest: Alcohol Sponsor: Thvia Shetley Judged: 11/26/2017
~2nd Place~ Contest: A Vice You Love Sponsor: Rob Carmack Judged: 11/29/2015
Entered, March 6, 2025 For the "St. Patrick's Day Contest" Sponsor, Oliver Mckeithan
'Round three in the morning I wake to see that it's time for my break. I can hardly wait to keep my sweet date- I bounce out of bed and then take my flashlight with me to the fridge to bring Irish creme- just a smidge- to my special place, a real quiet space where I and my date can abridge the writes that I worked on that day. And so, with my Muse and her stay, with sips of our drink, we each share a wink and fine-tune my words right away. An hour or so and we're done; I'm bleary, but still, it was fun! That sweet Irish creme had sharpened my beam! Now back to my sleep till the sun. So this is the vice that I love- which I find so hard to rid of. This 'amphetamine' to thoughts, adds a sheen- me, Baileys, and Muse up above!
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