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The Velvet Beach

Let me walk along the velvet beach,
collecting shells upon crushed stretch.
Sun rearing-up a nine year old — teach 
her to be happy, care-free, an oceanic sketch.

Eyes wide open, examine the gifts of the sea.
Brunette hair cascading over the shoulders.
Her bare feet stride through shifting sands free.
The past warms me in this present colder.

With curiosity in seaswept zephyr-ease,
each open shell would land a nesting place.
Her caress of lovely fingerlings, bent knees,
behold a prize...the shellac of time and space.

Piece by piece, a plan from Auntie’s coving.
We’d dip into the shapes, shades, and whispering,
pleasure and pleasantries ensconced in loving
of the sea through the inner ear of offerings.

Tunnels of God—great in mercy and grace.
Small but cared for, this daughter and niece,
sister and friend — so much ancestry to trace
in each universe of person, place and the deceased.

5/17/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hind Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 7:17 PM
So lovely that it's haunting me, lol <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 8:38 PM
Hugs and blessings!
Peck Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:20 AM
A lovely poem paints a lovely painting in my mind--a small girl finding seashells on the beach. So precious.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Lovely poem, Kim. Congrats on your well deserved POTD ~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 6:14 PM
Thank you, Line ~ Hugs, Kim
Proxenos Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Hi Kim, You absolutely fascinate me with your creative clever crafting of your exquisite poems. well penned my friend, thoroughly enjoyed your write. Hugs and blessing and huge Congratulations on your being honored with POTD, hope you had a great day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs ~ Kim
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 3:13 AM
wonderful memories and imagery, belated congrats on POTD Kim:-) hugs Jan x
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Kelly Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 6:35 PM
Congratulations! Well deserved POTD. Was so long ago, yet your words instantly took me back to summers with my family. Thank you for that.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Thank you, David! Glad it brought back memories!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful "THE VELVET BEACH" write and picture. I love the beach and walking the sand. Have a blessed day with your win..................
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Your ending is solid! "so much ancestry to trace in each universe of person, place and the deceased." This will remain in my head today.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Gentile Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations Demetrios on your POTD! I so totally relate to your awesome write! It's so important!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:27 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 1:50 AM
Congratulations dearest, Kim! Well-deserved honor. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
La France Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Kim, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, love _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:22 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Fenn Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 4:55 PM
Beautiful, idyllic poem Kim! Congrats on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:22 AM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Roper Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Great write, Kim, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Nicole Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 11:22 AM
There are so many moments and emotions within, a tenderness that touches the heart so deeply. Your thoughts caress gently around me. This is beautiful and graceful, all at the same time. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Thank you, Nicole!
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Indeed a soul searching reflective piece, congratulations on potd Kim, and so fully deserved, for bringing the past back to life in this wonderful write, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Thank you, David!
Rone Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 8:07 AM
You did it again Kim. Congratulation. Keep up the prolific work and Thank You!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Thank you, Ken!
Merryman Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 8:01 AM
A beautifully descriptive write, sharing a precious time! Congrats on POTD, Kim! Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Cheney Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Wonderfully crafted memories and images. really enjoyed this poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Thank you, Kenneth!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:51 AM
It was indeed a pleasure to read your poem, Kim and my I heartily congratulate you on your POTD. Well done. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs :)
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 6:09 AM
Ooh. I felt this was so special. P.S. agrees, as we see. Congrats on POTD, Kim. Cheers, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:21 AM
A lovely read Kim, precious memories of a precious time, so worthy of poem of the day… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, Belle! <3
Sands Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations for POTD Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Downing  Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Beautiful and congratulations on potd, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Akkina!
Pandit Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 4:41 AM
BIG congrats Kim on POTD--enjoyed the walk on the beach through pleasant memories.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
May Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Lovely write KIm, Congrats on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
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