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Let me walk along the velvet beach, collecting shells upon crushed stretch. Sun rearing-up a nine year old — teach her to be happy, care-free, an oceanic sketch. Eyes wide open, examine the gifts of the sea. Brunette hair cascading over the shoulders. Her bare feet stride through shifting sands free. The past warms me in this present colder. With curiosity in seaswept zephyr-ease, each open shell would land a nesting place. Her caress of lovely fingerlings, bent knees, behold a prize...the shellac of time and space. Piece by piece, a plan from Auntie’s coving. We’d dip into the shapes, shades, and whispering, pleasure and pleasantries ensconced in loving of the sea through the inner ear of offerings. Tunnels of God—great in mercy and grace. Small but cared for, this daughter and niece, sister and friend — so much ancestry to trace in each universe of person, place and the deceased. 5/17/2021

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Date: 6/1/2021 9:20:00 AM
A lovely poem paints a lovely painting in my mind--a small girl finding seashells on the beach. So precious.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2021 5:18:00 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 5/31/2021 8:18:00 AM
Lovely poem, Kim. Congrats on your well deserved POTD ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2021 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Line ~ Hugs, Kim
Date: 5/24/2021 11:23:00 AM
Hi Kim, You absolutely fascinate me with your creative clever crafting of your exquisite poems. well penned my friend, thoroughly enjoyed your write. Hugs and blessing and huge Congratulations on your being honored with POTD, hope you had a great day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2021 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/21/2021 3:13:00 AM
wonderful memories and imagery, belated congrats on POTD Kim:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 5/20/2021 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations! Well deserved POTD. Was so long ago, yet your words instantly took me back to summers with my family. Thank you for that.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, David! Glad it brought back memories!
Date: 5/20/2021 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful "THE VELVET BEACH" write and picture. I love the beach and walking the sand. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 5/20/2021 8:21:00 AM
Your ending is solid! "so much ancestry to trace in each universe of person, place and the deceased." This will remain in my head today.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 5/20/2021 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations Demetrios on your POTD! I so totally relate to your awesome write! It's so important!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 5/20/2021 1:50:00 AM
Congratulations dearest, Kim! Well-deserved honor. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 5/19/2021 6:30:00 PM
Kim, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, love _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:22:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 5/19/2021 4:55:00 PM
Beautiful, idyllic poem Kim! Congrats on POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:22:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 5/19/2021 11:29:00 AM
Great write, Kim, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:21:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 5/19/2021 11:22:00 AM
There are so many moments and emotions within, a tenderness that touches the heart so deeply. Your thoughts caress gently around me. This is beautiful and graceful, all at the same time. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:21:00 AM
Thank you, Nicole!
Date: 5/19/2021 8:53:00 AM
Indeed a soul searching reflective piece, congratulations on potd Kim, and so fully deserved, for bringing the past back to life in this wonderful write, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, David!
Date: 5/19/2021 8:07:00 AM
You did it again Kim. Congratulation. Keep up the prolific work and Thank You!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Ken!
Date: 5/19/2021 8:01:00 AM
A beautifully descriptive write, sharing a precious time! Congrats on POTD, Kim! Blessings, Kim M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 5/19/2021 7:31:00 AM
Wonderfully crafted memories and images. really enjoyed this poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Kenneth!
Date: 5/19/2021 6:51:00 AM
It was indeed a pleasure to read your poem, Kim and my I heartily congratulate you on your POTD. Well done. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs :)
Date: 5/19/2021 6:09:00 AM
Ooh. I felt this was so special. P.S. agrees, as we see. Congrats on POTD, Kim. Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 5/19/2021 5:21:00 AM
A lovely read Kim, precious memories of a precious time, so worthy of poem of the day… Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Belle! <3
Date: 5/19/2021 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 5/19/2021 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful and congratulations on potd, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina!
Date: 5/19/2021 4:41:00 AM
BIG congrats Kim on POTD--enjoyed the walk on the beach through pleasant memories.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Date: 5/19/2021 4:35:00 AM
Lovely write KIm, Congrats on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 5:26:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 5/19/2021 4:00:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!!! Love it. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2021 5:26:00 AM
Gina, thank you! <3
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