The vaporised self

he who seeks is not
and yet he seeks touch tender
to enliven soul within


rest analysis 
dear heart and meld with the flow
becoming the flame itself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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DiMino Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 10:17 AM
What we touch, are touched by, are forever bound on some level of experience I tend to believe -- you got me thinking.
Seeker Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Every knowing is by touch, is it not? Our five senses touch and transmit, embrace and imbibe.
Empress Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 10:10 PM
“Becoming the flame itself”’what a line! Deep and soulful as always dear seeker. Your words drift us to a realm of light and bliss, pleasure reading your work,
Seeker Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 4:07 AM
So delighted you enjoyed, IE
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