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"The Vanilla Ice Cream Knights and The Raspberry Queen"
"You’ve been spooning too much Vanilla Icecream”, she advised the buffoon all the feathery self-blustering chirpers parted way, she had loaded guns she positively glided into the room “Diamonds my old bean,” she grinned, “have no use for vanilla or rocky road Knights their dripping soft amour, sterilized in Pine-o-clean polished up to a frenzy with squirts of Mr Sheen” "Diamonds, old chap" she admonished, "they do not stand alone they stand beside a King if they must... but they are always - and wherever - The Queen” in that, you can most definitely, Trust “To the Trolls”, she spooned him some more she drew out her sword, nothing like the crying game it was ultra sharp, fountain-tipped and poisoned with ink “Off with their heads!” she maniacally laughed background noise the "In-n-Out" crowd, the tinkling of nervous laughter sanctimonious prayers to the here-ever-after Their trollish heads rolled onto the floor the Chirpers claws covered in blood scurried back home, like rats and closed all their safe doors Her raspberries, juicy and ripe sugar-coated and glistening bowling balls used as pins her lowest hems they’re for tarts, crusted in ignorance she uses their black beady eyes for buttons, sows them all in long rows keeps them singular, stagnant, apart nobly she gives them all a perfect death, kills all her darlings swift and clean it always works out for the best to be up front, from the start, when you are - The Queen Who needs the Knights and their chortling minions? When you have warm sunlight and a hot King with a big gun In your Raspberry Queen March (LadyLabyrinth / 2020)
“You’re So Cool”, Jonathan Bree https://youtu.be/Bt6A7IJtteI
Body so fit So full of spark With affirmations As your wall art You were driven Eyes on the prize A yoga routine Home exercise Now like the faded star In sunset boulevard I play the devoted butler Morning coffees by the bed While all hard fought endeavours Bring in diminished returns You're so cool, it's true You're my kind of girl Keep you 'till the end Find solace in the privilege to pursue Most people are crushed into servitude"
LYRICS/ “You’re So Cool”, Jonathan Bree https://genius.com/Jonathan-bree-youre-so-cool-lyrics amour/armour hmmm, "Happy Halloween".... or thanks giving - your choice. Alternative Title: "What Fresh Hell is This?" artiste: Gabe Leonard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/24/2020 8:11:00 AM
I first thought it was about eating Vanilla Ice Cream with Raspberry sauce. What a wonderful surprise and write. "Great Job." Have a wonderful day with hugs..............
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Date: 11/2/2020 4:45:00 PM
There is a solid reason why even mighty kings are wise to fear the so often shrewder and even mightier Queen! Your verses, depths, flow, and creativity always awe me as well as gift me immense poetic inspiration in my own lesser but humble offerings inked. A fav.. God bless.....
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/2/2020 10:48:00 PM
I was reading a poem here by some yankish turkey who had the temerity to suggest diamonds don't usually end up with knights - he'd imparted this gift while delivering a eulogy about spooning ice cream. All rather vanilla. Diamonds, I thought, have their uses for knights on the playing board, but if a Diamond Queen must be paired up with a partner, at all - then, surely she'd ditch the vanilla knights and make a strategic move to play with a King. I have a thing for Raspberries...
Date: 11/2/2020 7:43:00 AM
Off with their heads and can I have two mounds of those raspberries xx
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Date: 11/2/2020 4:28:00 PM
such an original response...
Date: 11/1/2020 3:26:00 PM
What a wonderful imaginative piece. Had to read it a few times. There is so much going on. Well penned indeed. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 11/1/2020 3:28:00 PM
;). x

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