Deb Wilson Poet Limerick

The Vampire and the Lady of the Night

There once was a vampire called Vincent
Finding true love was his main intent
As he skulked through the night
Causing women a fright
Biting necks was how he chose to vent

One night Vincent met up with a lady
You might say her job was rather shady
Soon she said what the heck
And she offered her neck
Then he gave her a thrill hot as Hades!

She fell in love as he sucked her blood
Vincent too as he felt his heart thud
Now he was quite love-struck
Could not believe his luck
She made him feel like some vampire stud!



*for Halloween Limerick contest
sponsored by John Freeman

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 29, 2010 at 4:33 AM Congratulations Deb on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol

James Fraser November 26, 2010 at 11:19 AM Terrific triple Limerick Deb, most deserved on it's win in John's contest >> James

Michael J. Falotico November 26, 2010 at 3:48 AM Great win Deb!!! Congrats!!!! love Michael

Francine Roberts November 25, 2010 at 11:21 AM great entry, congrats on your win in the contest, I knew this one would do well

Wilma Neels November 25, 2010 at 9:13 AM Deb, congratulations on your awesome win in John's contest ;)

Robert A. Dufresne November 25, 2010 at 4:16 AM Congratulations to you Deb on a fine win!

Sara Kendrick November 25, 2010 at 3:56 AM Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara

Daniel Cwiak November 24, 2010 at 9:18 PM Congrats on this witty write, Deb. Wonderful story and well deserved win. Dan C

Dr Hitendra Mehta November 24, 2010 at 9:00 PM Deb....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 24, 2010 at 8:10 PM Congrats Deb on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick luv.. enjoy a big win tonight my friend with luv..

Joyce Johnson November 24, 2010 at 4:41 PM Well I guess I am glad they found each other. congratulations ldeb. Great work. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire November 24, 2010 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your win in John's contest, Deb! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta November 24, 2010 at 2:27 PM Congratulatiobns on this well deser ed win, Deb

Andrea Dietrich November 24, 2010 at 2:03 PM I remember this one and how much I liked it. A big congrats to you, Deb. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman November 24, 2010 at 1:44 PM Congratulation Deb on your worthy poem's third place, and happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses

John Loving Iii November 21, 2010 at 4:50 AM cute when two monsters meet and fallin love. jhl

Duncan Chappell November 20, 2010 at 8:58 AM excellent poem here my friend like it

Carol Sunshine Brown October 29, 2010 at 12:23 PM Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Deb. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2010 at 10:03 AM Hey, I want to hear about him "turning her" . Is she gonna be a vampiress? This was GREAT, Deb. REally creative. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire October 29, 2010 at 8:57 AM Way cool limerick for John's contest, Deb. There is always a bit of eroticism in vampire stories and you captured it well in your poem. Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts October 28, 2010 at 8:57 PM adorable story, good luck in the contest