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The Vampire and the Lady of the Night

There once was a vampire called Vincent Finding true love was his main intent As he skulked through the night Causing women a fright Biting necks was how he chose to vent One night Vincent met up with a lady You might say her job was rather shady Soon she said what the heck And she offered her neck Then he gave her a thrill hot as Hades! She fell in love as he sucked her blood Vincent too as he felt his heart thud Now he was quite love-struck Could not believe his luck She made him feel like some vampire stud! *for Halloween Limerick contest sponsored by John Freeman

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Date: 11/29/2010 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2010 11:19:00 AM
Terrific triple Limerick Deb, most deserved on it's win in John's contest >> James
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Date: 11/26/2010 3:48:00 AM
Great win Deb!!! Congrats!!!! love Michael
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:21:00 AM
great entry, congrats on your win in the contest, I knew this one would do well
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:13:00 AM
Deb, congratulations on your awesome win in John's contest ;)
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations to you Deb on a fine win!
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Date: 11/25/2010 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:18:00 PM
Congrats on this witty write, Deb. Wonderful story and well deserved win. Dan C
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:00:00 PM
Deb....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:10:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick luv.. enjoy a big win tonight my friend with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:41:00 PM
Well I guess I am glad they found each other. congratulations ldeb. Great work. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest, Deb! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:27:00 PM
Congratulatiobns on this well deser ed win, Deb
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:03:00 PM
I remember this one and how much I liked it. A big congrats to you, Deb. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:44:00 PM
Congratulation Deb on your worthy poem's third place, and happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/21/2010 4:50:00 AM
cute when two monsters meet and fallin love. jhl
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:58:00 AM
excellent poem here my friend like it
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Date: 10/29/2010 12:23:00 PM
Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Deb. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2010 10:03:00 AM
Hey, I want to hear about him "turning her" . Is she gonna be a vampiress? This was GREAT, Deb. REally creative. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/29/2010 8:57:00 AM
Way cool limerick for John's contest, Deb. There is always a bit of eroticism in vampire stories and you captured it well in your poem. Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/28/2010 8:57:00 PM
adorable story, good luck in the contest
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