The Vagrant

He stumbles on the subway
Initially I cringe
I'm put off by the way he smells
From alcoholic binge

He mumbles incoherent
I start to feel ashamed
I slide my hand in my front pocket
Fumbling for some change

But I don't think he's asking
And now I feel confused
Why suddenly he's deathly still
In contemplative muse

It's then I sensed my pity
That's founded in this thought
This vagrant's smell is rank with failure
Surely mine is not

But just as surely comes the notion 
That my thought is wrong
That maybe this man's always been
My equal all along

And in my mind I contemplate
Why I refused to see
My world won't be so bad a place
If love is given free

And so my judgment loosens as
I know not where he's been
A brotherhood in harmony
Absolves the need for sin

I owe this man his right to freedom
The same that he owes me
I spare myself the cost of pain
And simply let him be

And from that moment on I'd ponder
My inner vagrancy
But was it me who smiled at him
Or him who smiled at me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/20/2009 8:10:00 AM
Excellent work Yoni especially the last stanza.Rgds Brian & thanks for your blog comments
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Date: 2/16/2009 9:17:00 PM
An absolute Great write Yoni. I agree with Carrie, excellent images. Thanks for sharing...Belinda
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Date: 2/16/2009 6:08:00 PM
Excellent images...could visualize the whole scene, and the outcome of this encounter was so well put in those awesome last three lines! ~ Carrie
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