Pat Adams Poet Limerick

The Vacuum Cleaner Bong

Once a hippie with a "high" demeanor
Made a big "Bong" from a vacuum cleaner
The dust he forgot
His coughing throat caught
Now there's no pot, and his face's much greener!

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Susan Gentry April 24, 2018 at 5:57 PM Lol... seemed like a good idea at the time I'm guessing. Enjoyed this. Pat Adams April 24, 2018 at 11:02 PM Like they say, The best laid plans!...80)....Glad you liked it!

Darlene De Beaulieu April 22, 2018 at 7:58 PM Hello Pat, your poem made me smile. Have a nice evening my friend. Pat Adams April 22, 2018 at 8:34 PM You as well! I'm glad you liked it!

Michelle Faulkner April 22, 2018 at 11:31 AM I, of course, don't know the first thing about using a bong - but it sounds like something a person "under the influence" would think " Why not?" Pat Adams April 22, 2018 at 4:57 PM I, of course don't either but if I was guessing I'd guess it was a water pipe that filters smoke to make it less harsh! Totally guessing you understand!..80)

Caren Krutsinger April 21, 2018 at 8:00 PM If I could stop laughing long enough to post something I would. Oh, my goodness. This is DARLING! I am putting it on my FAV list. Thanks Pat for the laugh. I needed it. Pat Adams April 22, 2018 at 7:07 AM Yeah, Nostalgia makes for good........I mean fantasy makes for good poems sometimes! Yeah, that's what I meant!.....;0)