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The Vacuum Cleaner Bong

Once a hippie with a "high" demeanor Made a big "Bong" from a vacuum cleaner The dust he forgot His coughing throat caught Now there's no pot, and his face's much greener!

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/24/2018 5:57:00 PM

Lol... seemed like a good idea at the time I'm guessing. Enjoyed this.

Pat Adams
Date: 4/24/2018 11:02:00 PM

Like they say, The best laid plans!...80)....Glad you liked it!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/22/2018 7:58:00 PM

Hello Pat, your poem made me smile. Have a nice evening my friend.

Pat Adams
Date: 4/22/2018 8:34:00 PM

You as well! I'm glad you liked it!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/22/2018 11:31:00 AM

I, of course, don't know the first thing about using a bong - but it sounds like something a person "under the influence" would think " Why not?"

Pat Adams
Date: 4/22/2018 4:57:00 PM

I, of course don't either but if I was guessing I'd guess it was a water pipe that filters smoke to make it less harsh! Totally guessing you understand!..80)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/21/2018 8:00:00 PM

If I could stop laughing long enough to post something I would. Oh, my goodness. This is DARLING! I am putting it on my FAV list. Thanks Pat for the laugh. I needed it.

Pat Adams
Date: 4/22/2018 7:07:00 AM

Yeah, Nostalgia makes for good........I mean fantasy makes for good poems sometimes! Yeah, that's what I meant!.....;0)