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Is it hearty to eager gaze at him with fond hope? As the latter view with life borne, in gradual slope. A high-flying plane to God's never-ending city. But picking dreadful death isn't offered entirely. Endwise, I'll once again aim to relish a joyful life. A cheerful get-together for all who have left strife. No also poignant anguish, torment, or intricacy. Since I merely bear all lack, will not require any. In eternal Heaven, God will reward and soothe me. As we promptly proceed on a never-ending journey. With ample time, we'll be heeded as utterly were. To sustain in perpetuity with my brood there. As I anxiously exit from this premonition planet, At the point when I enter Heaven's greatness exquisite. Nudging me will reliably provide no justifiable excuse. In regards to this loathsome and impure recluse.
Written: November 21, 2021

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Date: 11/24/2021 9:39:00 PM
"In eternal Heaven, God will reward and soothe me". This is our hope that pushes us on ! God will be merciful and He will reward us with eternal bliss after our tiresome sojourn on this Earth ! Your Faith shines, Lassad
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Date: 11/24/2021 1:12:00 AM
Profound, deep and enlightening! Thanks for this exquisite composition... Silpika
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Date: 11/22/2021 4:17:00 AM
It's best to keep a positive attitude as you advocate, Lasaad. Heaven awaits for those with good deeds on earth. Much depth to your thoughts.
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Date: 11/22/2021 3:46:00 AM
Jesus bore it all on the cross so that we humans would not have to pay. Without Him we would be nothing but with Him we are forgiven. I enjoyed reading this one. I really like that picture. Seems like I have seen that place somewhere in some snapshots and it is called horseshoe bend but where in the world I can't remember. Thanks for all your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/22/2021 1:06:00 AM
The most evil of person can still enter heaven if he repents sincerely.
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