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The Unsupervised Stop Sign

There they were, resting before me black orbs with a layer of white surrounded by glass an invitation if ever I saw one I reached my hand out in defiance of the rules wanting to devour them, unnoticed suddenly I stopped... the thinly veiled threat of punishment rang in my head "Don't touch the cookies before dinner" I wanted to, I needed to there was a hunger to taste one I reached out again, then stopped pulled my hand back, my fingers fell limp I walked away, my head bowed in silence separating myself from my dilemma as I sat down at the dinner table alone waiting for dinner my eyes still looking at the glass jar of cookies

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Date: 10/9/2023 6:42:00 AM
Oh my this makes me want to eat cookies now! Chocolate cookies.. This write is absolutely delicious and the way you've described that yearning to taste the sweet cream and devour it! Such an amazing and saccharine write, truly enjoyed reading this!!
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Date: 10/9/2023 3:31:00 AM
Im craving for cookies as i read this! What a brilliant take on this prompt! So well written! And delivered, unique and well articulated. Your lines flow very well too. You are truly a gifted storyteller! Wishing you all the best for the contest
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Date: 10/8/2023 4:54:00 PM
Ha ha, love this, Frederic! Such a creative and fun take on the topic! :)
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