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The Unpredictable

~The Unpredictable~ Being judged changed her attitude voluntarily her Communicating will grow beyond, she will not feel trapped or suffer her velocity will willfully create wrath among those who had judged her. Ready to show the whole world her shifting to shipshape will let him yowl and hear no echo. She will make him feel she is superior will dismiss her liaison with this family will afford to brag about her brain its beauty will feel attractive authentic her serenity will serve to seek a security that will vanquish who poured his venom over her. The inner woman she knew which had lived with a past suddenly became a stranger changed to become overwhelmed with happiness a rich soul. She has been single skeptic since fifteen years her decision will overcome her shyness send a signal towards a special individual who might cast his spellbound over carry her as far away towards A spiritual sphere. Her appetite will become apparent to arouse that aristocrat approve admire her personality cruise towards a bright future. A sensational life will begin abruptly, ignoring the abuse, Welcoming freedom that will prevail towards her adventurous encounter. One of the biggest moments of her life when she would find someone who still believes in love believes in the same Goals and aspirations. Then her adoration towards him will exude beyond a birth she will amaze her companion with an angelic appearance different allure. She hadn't finished the sentence when she heard the door creak it was him her first love when younger in age. The view enlivened her imagination remembering how Yesterday he found her and asked if she was free that happening for a reason of us meeting at the right time right place will get us together create a beautiful home for the near future that was his message. They stayed in love since the creaking of that door. Never did she travel backwards when escaped her long past history of abuse being judged over the years by her husband nightmares. Therese Bacha 17 November 2013

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Date: 7/6/2013 9:49:00 AM
It's a great poet who can relate such feeling..... Your talent has not diminished at all. Your strength is now a tremendous asset when blended with your courage... Love you more each day.... Jake
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/7/2013 7:12:00 PM
Hello dear John, loved as usual your review about my poem, all the way through you were always here to support me. I do thank you so much. Terry xoxo.
Date: 7/4/2013 10:47:00 PM
It's been a wild crazy ride and you have come through it . You remind of a line F. Scott Fittsgerald wrote in The Beautiful and The Dammed or Tender Is The Night. Anyway its been a long struggle with broken heart and such and the last line is "Nobody believed I Would make it through ;But I did, I made it and I showed them all. Michael LoL.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/4/2013 11:41:00 PM
Thank you Michael for passing by, you lifted my moral, but I will not drink, yet tonight I will smoke my last cigarette before going to bed. We had a nice conversation tonight, Liked it. Terry xoxo
Date: 7/2/2013 6:19:00 PM
Terry; This is amazing that you wrote this so good. no one knows what a person's past history has been like - unless they have walked in their shoes. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/2/2013 8:33:00 PM
Hi Lucy, so happy to see you back. Thank you so much I am happy you enjoyed it. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 7/1/2013 5:48:00 AM
I now see what you mean by "the unpredictable" title of your poem, quite appropriate my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What an amazing piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/1/2013 4:54:00 PM
Hello my friend. Here you are the first to leave your encouraging review. Thank you so much Russell.

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