The Unpredictable

~The Unpredictable~


Being judged changed her attitude 
voluntarily her Communicating 
will grow beyond, she will not feel trapped 
 or suffer her velocity will willfully create wrath 
among those who had judged her. 
                             
Ready to show the whole world her shifting 
to shipshape  will let him yowl and hear 
no echo.

She will make him feel she is superior 
 will dismiss her liaison with this family 
will afford to brag about her brain its beauty 
will feel attractive authentic her serenity 
will serve to seek a security that will vanquish 
who poured his venom over her.
                                                     
The inner woman she knew which had lived 
with a past suddenly became a stranger 
changed to become overwhelmed with happiness 
a rich soul.

She has been single skeptic since fifteen 
years her decision will overcome her shyness 
send a signal towards a special individual 
who might cast his spellbound over 
carry her as far away towards
A spiritual sphere.
                          
Her appetite will become apparent to arouse
that aristocrat approve admire her personality 
cruise towards a bright future. 

A sensational life will begin abruptly, ignoring the abuse,
Welcoming freedom that will prevail towards her 
adventurous encounter.
                            
One of the biggest moments of her life when she would find 
someone who still believes in love believes in the same
Goals and aspirations. 

Then her adoration towards him will exude beyond a birth 
 she will amaze her companion with an angelic appearance 
different allure. 

She hadn't finished the sentence when she heard 
the door creak it was him her first love 
when younger in age.
 
The view enlivened her imagination remembering how
Yesterday he found her and asked if she was free 
that happening for a reason of us meeting at the right time 
 right place will get us together create a beautiful home 
for the near future that was his message.

They stayed in love since the creaking of that door.
Never did she travel backwards when escaped 
her long past history of abuse being judged 
over the years by her husband nightmares. 
 
Therese Bacha
 17 November 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/6/2013 9:49:00 AM
It's a great poet who can relate such feeling..... Your talent has not diminished at all. Your strength is now a tremendous asset when blended with your courage... Love you more each day.... Jake
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/7/2013 7:12:00 PM
Hello dear John, loved as usual your review about my poem, all the way through you were always here to support me. I do thank you so much. Terry xoxo.
Date: 7/4/2013 10:47:00 PM
It's been a wild crazy ride and you have come through it . You remind of a line F. Scott Fittsgerald wrote in The Beautiful and The Dammed or Tender Is The Night. Anyway its been a long struggle with broken heart and such and the last line is "Nobody believed I Would make it through ;But I did, I made it and I showed them all. Michael LoL.
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Date: 7/4/2013 11:41:00 PM
Thank you Michael for passing by, you lifted my moral, but I will not drink, yet tonight I will smoke my last cigarette before going to bed. We had a nice conversation tonight, Liked it. Terry xoxo
Date: 7/2/2013 6:19:00 PM
Terry; This is amazing that you wrote this so good. no one knows what a person's past history has been like - unless they have walked in their shoes. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:33:00 PM
Hi Lucy, so happy to see you back. Thank you so much I am happy you enjoyed it. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 7/1/2013 5:48:00 AM
I now see what you mean by "the unpredictable" title of your poem, quite appropriate my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What an amazing piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/1/2013 4:54:00 PM
Hello my friend. Here you are the first to leave your encouraging review. Thank you so much Russell.
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