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The Universe

The universe blew to bits behind me,  But I didn't notice.  I was looking the other way, soaring wildly,  Losing substance,  Through time and space toward eternity  Toward God.

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Date: 7/3/2018 12:08:00 PM
The universe blew to bits behind me, But I didn't notice: This is excellent
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/8/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Al. Glad I "hooked" you. Beverly Read
Date: 8/24/2017 10:26:00 AM
Great poem. The first line really took me in.
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/24/2017 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Justin. You know what they say about "hooks." I guess that's what the first line is. Glad you liked. Beverly Read

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