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The Universe

The universe blew to bits behind me, But I didn't notice. I was looking the other way, soaring wildly, Losing substance, Through time and space toward eternity Toward God.

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/25/2025 12:19:00 AM

Concept of Universe is still beyond human perception. Attempt of any problem to explain should not be focused on God. God is not the ultimate solution. Have Good Days.

Al Juman

Date: 7/3/2018 12:08:00 PM

The universe blew to bits behind me, But I didn't notice: This is excellent

Beverly Read
Date: 8/8/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Al. Glad I "hooked" you. Beverly Read

Justin Clason

Date: 8/24/2017 10:26:00 AM

Great poem. The first line really took me in.

Beverly Read
Date: 8/24/2017 12:24:00 PM

Thank you Justin. You know what they say about "hooks." I guess that's what the first line is. Glad you liked. Beverly Read