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The Unfinished Thought

Annoyance. Is it the UNfAir CApitoLizatIoN AmonG Words? Or the run-on sentences that keep going and going and going and going and What about sentences that are spelt rong. and the one's that dont have right grammar/ What about the ones that don't make sense? refrigerator. Or the unfinished thou- Annoyance Annoyance has Annoyance has a Sorry. Does Suspense annoy you too? Oh look. Once again, the unfinished thought. But you said poems must rhyme. They must have a time they must be a lime Wait, hold on. That didn't make sense. Sorry. That's the annoyance. There is no order. No stanza no iambic pentameter no rhyme no time no- There's the unfinished thought. Its like a dance with no steps a game with no jeps. STOP. That's not a word. It's just the annoyance. Is it bothersome yet? No scheme, no plot not even one finished thought. It's all disquieting. The sounds of all the mistakes rioting. The annoyance within the words, the mistakes flying around like birds. The annoyance is That's right. An unfinished thought.

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Date: 5/20/2017 1:55:00 PM
If I find a poem annoying for some reason I simply stop reading and don't comment lol - your poem sure made me smile Alee can congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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