Kp Nunez Poet Verse

The Undertaker of Time

As sure as the sun comes up to emblazon the sky,

it will travel up to reach its peak then down its path;

For without the sunset to mark the end of each day

on the horizon, and herald the coming of the night,

how can man acknowledge the passing of time?








08 August 2015
The Answer Contest
Sponsor: SKAT A

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Laura Breidenthal September 19, 2015 at 2:57 PM Very thoughtful poem here, that leaves one grateful for the sense of time the sun blesses us with! Beautiful photo as well. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 8:44 PM You did a primo job, Kim. BIG congrats to you.

Alexis Y. August 18, 2015 at 12:31 AM Kim, l stopped by tonight to say congratulations on your awesome :-) Alexis

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:14 PM Kim. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

Wilma Neels August 12, 2015 at 8:21 AM Kim, this is an awesome entry for the contest ;) absolutely love the title you chose :) Good luck for the contest, hugs Wilma

Carol Eastman August 11, 2015 at 12:05 PM Very well done... The Title definitely drew me in.

Lindsay Laurie August 11, 2015 at 1:39 AM G'day Kim... another great poem from your pen Kim. Good luck in the contest Kim - Lindsay

Yolanda Scott August 9, 2015 at 2:57 PM Just beautiful. Good luck!!!

Robert Lindley August 9, 2015 at 10:12 AM Looks like a great entry in that contest. A7

Richard Lamoureux August 9, 2015 at 9:21 AM Wise words, I also love the photo.

Njeri Hunjeri August 9, 2015 at 3:19 AM Wow this is great Kim! Very impressive. This is a winner!

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2015 at 11:56 PM Yes, it is so many things to us, and that last line especially!!! I sure enjoyed your entry in the sun contest. I finally thought to do a cool picture like you did too!!

Emile Pinet August 8, 2015 at 5:10 PM A good read requiring the reader to think as well as feel his way through the words. Emile.

Eileen Manassian August 8, 2015 at 4:42 PM This is lovely, Kim. I love that last line. Good luck in the contest with this strong entry. I was too late to enter mine! Take care...Hugs

Nette Onclaud August 8, 2015 at 1:50 PM ohh yes.. the changing of time marked by your mellow piece, kim.. fascinating... huggs

Constance La France August 8, 2015 at 1:48 PM Kim , this poem is outstanding and a lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my Seuss poem

Ian Jones August 8, 2015 at 9:19 AM I wonder if we are mesmerised by sunsets as we wave goodbye to that day in our lives as it joins the sun dipping below the horizon. This is the image your poem brings in to my mind. Lovely image. Kind regards, Ian

Afolabi Muideen August 8, 2015 at 6:44 AM A stunning write for the contest. It is excellence. Good luck.......A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 8, 2015 at 4:01 AM A poetically remarkable question-answer, dear Kim. Good luck with your contest!