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The under water solution

When the money is mostly spent Find the lowest terms for the rent A car on a train Protects well from the rain But better yet let's get a tent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/5/2013 10:05:00 PM
Well Duke, I think I will buy me a 3 wheel bike with basket for my blanket, food and big cat, for protection ;} thank you for reading my haiku six. you have a blessed day, OK .
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Date: 11/19/2012 11:16:00 AM
[The once was a man who had spent/All the money he'd saved for his rent/ so he slept on a train/to keep from the rain/ Soon he will buy a new tent!] Light & Love Happy T day!
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Date: 9/26/2011 2:28:00 PM
Delighted to see you posted here today Duke. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry. Love, Carol
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