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The Under Water Solution

When the money is mostly spent
Find the lowest terms for the rent
A car on a train
Protects well from the rain
But better yet let's get a tent

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Debbie Duncan

March 5, 2013 at 10:05 PM

Well Duke, I think I will buy me a 3 wheel bike with basket for my blanket, food and big cat, for protection ;} thank you for reading my haiku six. you have a blessed day, OK .

Debbie Guzzi

November 19, 2012 at 11:16 AM

[The once was a man who had spent/All the money he'd saved for his rent/ so he slept on a train/to keep from the rain/ Soon he will buy a new tent!] Light & Love Happy T day!