The Uncaring Bastards

As the wind blew over the smoking embers,
The smells moved into homes-
Houses that stood by the ancient crematorium.
It's always crowded, so many people die these days-
We've even seen half burnt bodies,
There's no time to reduce you to ashes.
But we can purge you in other ways-
You can flow, (dead and burnt) through Ganges.
Or shall we top-up your fellow-being's grave
With your body, and let you disintegrate,
Together with another man's bones?
We can also, in full faith and silence, 
Submit you to the priest
Who sets up a luncheon of you, for scavengers.
Gone are the days, when we loved you enough 
To preserve you.
Now we're uncaring bastards 
Who were erroneously granted existence.
Birth without love, in death no solace...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/4/2013 6:50:00 AM
Very well written descriptive poem, filled with anger or perhaps pity for society and the way it has turned out.
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:40:00 AM
Many congratulations Sumaya on making it to first round of winners in Poetrysoup contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Sumaya. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:02:00 PM
How sad! Why are we like this?
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sumaya. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your being featured this week, sumaya
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:19:00 PM
Very raging thoughts. I like the expression, Birth without love, in death no solace. That is why people used to throw the dead bodies in the Ganges for the luncheon of the fish, Sumaya
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