The Un-Beetable Bug

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THE UN-BEETABLE BUG Simplicity, elasticity, beauty in the thirties, not like some sedans, ugly and beastly This popular car and it's history from the past, from it's World War two template, it sure did last How many know why it's being came to be, a car for the German people, to what you've seen The Sixties starts the decade of the Summer of love, unique form of the bug fits these times like a glove Born in Germany in yellow, black, blue or white, but see I desire the color red so alluringly bright Won't you agree, it looks sexy, pretty and nice? This models size and style sparkles to burst some spice Its voluptuous rounds makes it friendly and sleek, to busy roads and highways surely it can easily sneak It may look slow but I tell you: you are wrong! This small car runs like the shooting star song. Alongside trucks or vans, it doesn't tremble a fear as when I turn the key, horsepower shy with its gear. Easy so easy, I can turn the wheels to any curves soothing so soothing to my sometimes worried nerves Many a design of automobiles will pass but hey, my red Volkswagen still holds the class. The "un-beetable" Beetle bug definitely hits a big shot to a parking lot you can easily save her a spot ___________________________________________________________ 12/30/2015 15.55pm

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Kp Nunez

Date: 12/31/2015 9:09:00 PM

Cute write, cute car, cute poetess! Hi Olive! Here today just to read/reply and visit some. Wishing you the best this Christmas season and greater things in 2016! PS. Soupie reply in a bit. Hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/3/2016 6:47:00 AM

Thanks much Kim Indeed it is a cute car.. cute poetess wahhh you are quite right am small.. =`) petite too. :D! heheheh hugs!

James Fraser

Date: 12/31/2015 12:15:00 PM

Hey little one, you've chosen one of the most manufactured cars ever made. Love this driven journey through your words ~~ hugs ~~ James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 6:55:00 PM

Thanks much Huge one... =`) Im becoming redundant but il say it again that when I saw the contest this the car that first came to my mind.. =`) hugs!~Olive Eloisa xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2015 12:14:00 PM

wow, does yours look like that one in the picture EXACTLY? I never realized they had improved the body of it!! This looks really sporty in convertible form. LOVE it and your poem.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 6:53:00 PM

I do not own one Andie, I just find this car cute and really chic.. =`) timeless..=`) And yes according to my research this how it is now.. =`) it has evolve though some of its features before are still preserve.. =`)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/31/2015 3:59:00 AM

This is such a splendid write for this beautiful car my very dear friend Olive! So enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck in the contest! May i also have this chance to greet you and your family a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016! Best wishes to all! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 6:50:00 PM

Hi Leony, thanks much for always the generous comment.. =`) I enjoyed writing this although it take me long while to write it. :D Have not much time to write and been around here.. =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/31/2015 3:38:00 AM

A lovely tribute in rhyme you pay to this car which has been popular for so many years, Olive_eloi! I hope you're not driving it without a license!:) All the best & hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 6:49:00 PM

Paul, I really do not own a car and I do not have a plan having one, I just want to support Linda's contest and challenge.. :D first sight of her contest instantly my brain bulbs lights for this type of car.. =`) I always like its appearance, cute, small, chic, :D!