The Umbrella Man

i.

The day he lost her to a fallen world
He promised to be satisfied with life
His love came from above abundantly
Commissioned to give back put others first

One day the Sturm und Drang hit city streets
He viewed upon his high apartment floor
Then after business hours his neighbors parked
He witnessed many soaked from pouring rain

Instinctively he grabbed umbrella case
He pulled it from the scabbard to withdraw
His saber in right hand, ran down the stairs
Now opened sheltered fabric for the folks

The people parked now waited one by one
Because the gent had hurried them inside
He got the last one in so safe and dry
The people clapped, bade “thanks, umbrella man”

			ii

Weeks later:

He heard the honking horn across the street
A straggler struggles out of vehicle
Looks like a neighbor, hadn't seen before
He gets her out of pouring rain, she smiles

This man who was as masculine as can be
Had felt his legs go weak; her pretty face
She saw his handsome face, aglow; proclaimed -
“Am pleased to meet our famed Umbrella Man”

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Glossary

Sturm und Drang:  noun -  turmoil, storm and stress, violent disturbance and disorder

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/18/2015 4:20:00 PM
I saw you commenting to someone on their blank verse and just had to come check you out. I too love this kind of poetry. well especially since iambic pentameter is key to writing a good traditional sonnet. Love this down to earth (rainy) tale!
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Thomas Carney
Date: 1/7/2016 5:02:00 PM
Andrea, I am so glad you took the time to read my poem, which included Blank Verse. You know what that means don't you? ha ha......I just have to check your poetry out! Ya gotta love it....love poetry! Thomas
Date: 3/22/2015 10:31:00 AM
Great!
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Thomas Carney
Date: 3/23/2015 6:52:00 AM
Well thanks. You are my first and only responder. Peace. Thomas
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