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The Ultimate Goal

It is all a matter of control That being the ultimate goal Sugar coated words that present Do not hide the real intent Some are aware of the camouflaged lies See straight through the deliberate disguise Others will be drawn deep into the fold That being the ultimate goal

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/19/2024 2:52:00 AM

I love your style my friend in that almost each poem is both an absolute truth and a lesson. You can see through such people like a piece of tracing paper. so well said. Love and hugs Jennifer.

Deb M
Date: 10/22/2024 1:31:00 PM

Jennifer that is such a big ,genuine compliment and from the bottom of my heart “Thankyou” l really appreciate it my friend! Cuddles…Debx

Darrell Rose

Date: 10/17/2024 11:56:00 PM

Wow..... so I guess the heat of the political season is keeping your kitchen quite warm these days ...!!! Haha. Not sure if that was the genesis of this piece but .... I'm sure a forest of logs are available from both camps to fuel the flames. Such a sharp write. Short, accurate and complete. Intellectually satisfying. Well done. Darrell

Deb M
Date: 10/18/2024 2:22:00 AM

Thanks Darrell always value your thoughts my friend!…Debx