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The Ugly Truth

Riches Rampant beneath The surface, a body Dressed in curves, hard edges, and sea Bounty. Goodness That is needed By the masses, a gift, Yet used for self gain carelessly A rift. By those Who pursue greed Seeking gains and power Without the checks and balance of Nature. We see The ugly truth Over the globe, high bill Of disasters and waste so crude Oil Spills. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 06.29.10 For the Team Poetry Soup contest.

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Date: 9/2/2010 3:46:00 PM
nice write, congrats on the feature, enjoyed..P.D.
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:22:00 AM
A wonderful poem and a perfect one to be featured this week~~
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Caroline Cecile, for this unique piece, as among the featured poems for this week. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 8/30/2010 7:11:00 AM
ahhhh wonderfully conscious poem of the world Caroline ... congrates on being featured this week love Jayne
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:17:00 PM
Congrats Caroline on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations to you Caroline on your win in Team PoetrySoup's contest "Gulf Oil Spill". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:32:00 PM
Wow, I must have missed this when I was away on vacation. What a terrific series of cinquains on the oil spill, Caroline. Big congrats on placing second in the Soup contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:57:00 PM
Congrats Caroline on your winning poem in the Gulf Oil Spill contest with this brilliant write ..enjoy a wonderful victory today..this happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:40:00 AM
Enjoyed the read of your poem this afternoon, Caroline! Alles hier ist ja so wahr!!! Alles Gute und ein schönes Wochenende...Gert
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Date: 7/16/2010 6:13:00 PM
Love the first stanza!
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Date: 7/2/2010 6:46:00 PM
... poesy is the mouth-piece of humanity ... you’ve spoken for the down-trodden … everywhere ... like you're speaking for Africa ... if not for “ ” ... this is a winning slot, for sure ... Cheers! Canny
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Date: 7/1/2010 5:20:00 AM
great poem!
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Date: 6/30/2010 8:32:00 PM
Amazing truth, with the ugly consequences, best wishes for the contest Caroline, tc Wilma
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Date: 6/30/2010 4:29:00 PM
Wow! Incredible piece! Wonderfully written to describe oil spills. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/30/2010 4:27:00 PM
THE UGLY TRUTH IS SURELY UGLY BUT IT'S HAPPENING AND WE NEED TO BE MORE AWARE, GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST-SKAT
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