The Two Feet

THE TWO FEET by René Annandale
There was a man with two big feet
but never the two would meet.
For the left foot went definitely left
and the right foot went positively right
They would not even face each other at night.
Yet he would never trade them for any other.
One day the left foot said to the right
Do you think we might
be able to walk in the same direction?
The right foot said: Now what makes you ask such a silly question?
Well, said the Left. It is worth a try.
So the Right conceded, although he’d never know why.
For one day they traveled in harmony
but oh, it ended in a catastrophe.
You see, the man - the owner of the feet - 
had to cross a busy street.
He was going to the bakery
but ended up in the cemetery.
The two feet were sorry for their loss
He was, after all, a kindly boss.
Yet they were happy to not have been separated,
for that would have left them exasperated.
Separation they would be unable to bear
They will for ever be an unpaired pair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 19, 2016 at 8:43 PM
enjoying this one agaIN....SKAT
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January 20, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Thanks, Skat. I have been busy with Afrikaans material for literary festivals, but hope to return to Poetry Soup soon with a few new lines. :)
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May 14, 2015 at 7:01 PM
i FOUND THIS POEM A WONDERFUL READ! Thank you for sharing your poem on two feet. Imaginative and very wise!
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May 15, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Thank you for the encouragement, Diane. :)
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May 15, 2015 at 2:32 AM
Thank you for the encouragement, Diane. :*
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May 10, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Rene :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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May 11, 2015 at 3:22 AM
:) Thanks, Skat.
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April 30, 2015 at 9:33 PM
Rene, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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April 30, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Hi there, poet friend Linda. Thank you for your warm welcome. :)
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Rene, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 30, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome, SKAT. :) I write children's literature: stories and material for literary fairs, e.g. Eisteddfods. Not specializing in poetry, would rather say I'd like to brush up on my poetry skills. I have an author page on Fb; feel free to join.
Konos Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup...Enjoyed your poetry...soon I may have two feet...when the cast comes off....thanks again...
Annandale Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Aaww, Judy. Hope you will be back on your feet ( sorry, pun intended) :) soon. Thank you for your kind words.
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April 30, 2015 at 9:27 AM
- Hello Rene :) - I welcome you to P-Soup - Hope you will find much pleasure here with us :) - Share your thoughts and words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Annandale Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Anne Lise. :)
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