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The Twilight of Reality and Make Believe

In the twilight~~~~ of reality and make believe~~~
                    There where dreams hover
                        on the wings of Night
       And stillness belies the passage of honored TIME
             There, there in the palm of Eternity 
                                we meet

   We meet in this haven of Tranquility’s b*r*e*a*t*h
         Perfumed by Love’s signature serene scent
    These two lovers meticulously bind our naked souls
  with surreal and real bonds of floral fantasy fusion
                    until...yes...bound until...
            we are one and the universe is undone
               In the fluid mixture of homogenous 
                              E C S T A C Y
                                ....and....
                         d^a^z^z^l^i^n^g 

                                 L I G H T

        In the twilight~~~ of reality and make believe~~~~
    In absence of formulated thought or lived out dream
    In the nothingness of truth and the perfection of harmony
                         We lie, you and I…..
and the moments, the hours, the days, the years and  yes….eternity
                      Simply….pass us by….
                                   We lie
                                  We sigh
                                   We die
                                 You and I
                                     One
                              In the twilight
OF REALITY~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AND MAKE BELIEVE
                                   

                             Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 9:59 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Hugs Rick.
Breidenthal Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Oooh, I really like this poem..it dazzles the senses!"In absence of formulated thought or lived out dream In the nothingness of truth and the perfection of harmony We lie, you and I….." Beautiful lines.. Always, Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:33 AM
My favorite comment here used to describe this piece is Anne Lise's "beautiful and harmonic". Myself I think each of us should add a bit of make believe to our realities so that ordinary lives might become extraordinary.
Romaine Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Hey Eileen, stopped by for a visit and found this amazing work of art from you. Filled with such passion and lovely imagery! Beautifully expressed! Be Blessed, Neva
Onclaud Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:56 PM
way out of passion's gate, eileen.. enchanted am i!.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 1:59 PM
Ethereal in nature and very well written, with strong images and great flow. Your use of colorful scenes adds to the charm and the depth of this work making it delectable. Emile.
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 12:20 PM
- Beautiful and harmonic ...... like a beautiful dream, dear Eileen - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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