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The Trunk

I woke this morn a chilling sweat alarmed No recollection of the night before The sheets were drenched and mixed in beading blood That's when I heard the knocking at the door I sauntered to the front glint through the drapes Am startled by a beauty, don't recall “Not leaving” she says, “open, let me in” Last night I shared with her what would befall Some memories coming back I turn the knob She plants one on my lips, then many more On sofa out she blurts “Well, is it done ?” Don't answer her til I remember things She smiles and says “you did it” views my cuts The blood that's on my body source unknown Still no reply from me until I'm clear She voices “bye, I love you” her bemoan It's coming back to me “was I set up ?” Descends compendium of my cars trunk She must have drugged the brain between my legs Garage-my car-I'll search I could be sunk I turn the key to open up the lid A large dead man is scrunched up in a ball The sirens getting louder “I've been framed” I shake my head, about to take the fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/4/2015 3:07:00 PM
Oh-WoW! this is one I'll call one of my favorites... I stuck to it to the very end! Surprising ending, sadly unexpected... Thank you for sharing, AWESOME write... Tanya
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Thomas Carney
Date: 10/4/2015 3:34:00 PM
Thank you. I normally write fiction based on fact. However, this is all fiction. I had a fun time writing it though and putting myself in the place of the poor guy who took the fall. The irony here is there is also a dead man. Poor him. Blessings, Thomas
Date: 9/4/2015 1:53:00 PM
Well done :) had me very intrigued by this write. Well done.- Bubbles
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Sajid Mehmood
Date: 10/16/2017 3:03:00 PM
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Thomas Carney
Date: 9/5/2015 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Bubbles. I thought about a sequel but it does not work too well getting folks to follow a series. In fact, am glad you read this. I have not been on PS for months, and need to post a few poems here. Thanks, Thomas
Date: 11/30/2014 12:22:00 PM
Good stuff Thomas..Thanks for your visit to my page!
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Thomas Carney
Date: 2/20/2015 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Ken
Date: 11/30/2014 7:55:00 AM
Hi Sara Thanks for reading a total fiction story in iamb. Meter does not have to be perfect. I tend to press it only because I am trying to learn it and all the different forms. It's a journey to be sure. I read all my comments. Also try to always respond, though am sure I fall short. I enjoy your poetry a lot. Blessings, Thomas
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Date: 11/30/2014 6:15:00 AM
First, to get people to comment back you have to go to their page by clicking their name under their picture and comment on their work..When you reply here it doesn't get read by the person who commented..I enjoyed reading your story in poetic form..Sad ending though..Thanks for stopping by..I really don't do meter so if I did not get it correct on my work I can't do much about it..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thanks liam for the kind response.
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Date: 11/29/2014 9:16:00 AM
excellent pen thomas flowing golden pal explore a suggestion smiling love how you drew this ending powerfully dramatic
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Thomas Carney
Date: 10/4/2015 3:31:00 PM
Thanks for reading this liam. Best always, Thomas
Date: 11/19/2014 8:46:00 AM
I'll be darned, I did not rhyme line 2 & 4 in the 3rd stanza. My bad folks. Anyone have a line that the end word rhymes with "more" and is in iambic pentameter, feel free to change it. Thomas
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Date: 11/16/2014 12:45:00 PM
Lol, great imagination. Hope it's not true. Don't want a good man to go to waste. Just kidding-nah
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Thomas Carney
Date: 11/17/2014 1:20:00 PM
Not true milady, totally fiction. However, there is a skosh of truth I guess >>> the night before I had a nightmare, this was the impetus to the poem. It was about a dead man being in my TRUNK. Long story short --- I had this dream most likely because I had the trunk open, the carriage flooded with leaks after heavy rain, and the light drained the battery, so I had to jump the battery to get the Honda going again. Why this would turn into there being a dead guy in my trunk, I have no idea. My dreams are very vivid and adventurous; I love it. Thanks for reading this. Thomas

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