The Trunk

I woke this morn a chilling sweat alarmed 
No recollection of the night before 
The sheets were drenched and mixed in beading blood 
That's when I heard the knocking at the door 

I sauntered to the front glint through the drapes 
Am startled by a beauty, don't recall 
“Not leaving” she says, “open, let me in” 
Last night I shared with her what would befall 

Some memories coming back I turn the knob 
She plants one on my lips, then many more 
On sofa out she blurts “Well, is it done ?” 
Don't answer her til I remember things 

She smiles and says “you did it” views my cuts 
The blood that's on my body source unknown 
Still no reply from me until I'm clear 
She voices “bye, I love you” her bemoan 

It's coming back to me “was I set up ?” 
Descends compendium of my cars trunk 
She must have drugged the brain between my legs 
Garage-my car-I'll search I could be sunk 

I turn the key to open up the lid 
A large dead man is scrunched up in a ball 
The sirens getting louder “I've been framed” 
I shake my head, about to take the fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ellison Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Well done :) had me very intrigued by this write. Well done.- Bubbles
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October 16, 2017 at 3:03 PM
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Carney Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Bubbles. I thought about a sequel but it does not work too well getting folks to follow a series. In fact, am glad you read this. I have not been on PS for months, and need to post a few poems here. Thanks, Thomas
Carroll Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Good stuff Thomas..Thanks for your visit to my page!
Carney Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Thanks Ken
Carney Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Hi Sara Thanks for reading a total fiction story in iamb. Meter does not have to be perfect. I tend to press it only because I am trying to learn it and all the different forms. It's a journey to be sure. I read all my comments. Also try to always respond, though am sure I fall short. I enjoy your poetry a lot. Blessings, Thomas
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:15 AM
First, to get people to comment back you have to go to their page by clicking their name under their picture and comment on their work..When you reply here it doesn't get read by the person who commented..I enjoyed reading your story in poetic form..Sad ending though..Thanks for stopping by..I really don't do meter so if I did not get it correct on my work I can't do much about it..Sara
Carney Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Thanks liam for the kind response.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 9:16 AM
excellent pen thomas flowing golden pal explore a suggestion smiling love how you drew this ending powerfully dramatic
Carney Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Thanks for reading this liam. Best always, Thomas
Carney Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:46 AM
I'll be darned, I did not rhyme line 2 & 4 in the 3rd stanza. My bad folks. Anyone have a line that the end word rhymes with "more" and is in iambic pentameter, feel free to change it. Thomas
Harrell Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 12:45 PM
Lol, great imagination. Hope it's not true. Don't want a good man to go to waste. Just kidding-nah
Carney Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Not true milady, totally fiction. However, there is a skosh of truth I guess >>> the night before I had a nightmare, this was the impetus to the poem. It was about a dead man being in my TRUNK. Long story short --- I had this dream most likely because I had the trunk open, the carriage flooded with leaks after heavy rain, and the light drained the battery, so I had to jump the battery to get the Honda going again. Why this would turn into there being a dead guy in my trunk, I have no idea. My dreams are very vivid and adventurous; I love it. Thanks for reading this. Thomas
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