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The True Magic of the Evening

The true magic of the evening A soft breeze rustles through pine needles swishing amidst fireflies at play on a warm enchanting April night I am a bit skeptical as you take my hand, satin fingers intertwined, leading me to a secluded spot We sit in quiet anticipation as a bright full moon keeps watch from its cosmic perch, illuminating our magical evening “It is almost time” you say as the big dipper comes into view, directing our focus to the grove behind the chinaberry shrubs We can hear them giggling as tiny feet run atop fallen leaves creating little crackles echoing beyond the illumined forest canopy When suddenly crickets and cicadas perform a mesmerizing melody wafting from tree to tree and you point eagerly to the opening As twelve little fairies appear, dancing in a circle, singing along with the nighttime tune Iridescent wings shimmer and flutter as do our hearts as we watch It only lasts for a few moments and then they are gone, when you excitedly lean over and kiss me, then whispering you say, “See, I told you they were real” I couldn’t help but smile seeing the look on your face, your smile glowing brighter than anything in the sky as I fell in love with you all over again Proving to me once more, regardless of anything I could have possibly seen, anywhere on this night we could have gone, the true magic of my evening . . . will always be you Good night Soupers Have a great Easter weekend I will see you again on Monday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/17/2017 1:26:00 PM
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Date: 4/17/2017 12:26:00 PM
Hiya Chris. I'm always a day late and a dollar short (ha ha). I hope you holiday went well. It always goes by fast. You have this ability Chris to mesmerize any reader with expression and emotion. This is beautiful throughout. Read back your words and you will see. For those without love of any kind I pray.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/17/2017 12:58:00 PM
Hey, what's a day between friends and who needs a dollar, the best things in life are free. Just like this wonderful comment you have left on my poem. I appreciate you Lisa.
Date: 4/15/2017 12:07:00 PM
What an enchanting moment in time. Cherish it and bottle it up for its perfume to release when the days get shorter and colder:) A spellbound 7 Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/17/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie. It just may do that. :) I appreciate your kindness my friend.
Date: 4/15/2017 10:26:00 AM
Simply enchanting Chris! Easter Blessings, Connie : ) 7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie for your wonderful comment
Date: 4/15/2017 3:29:00 AM
Chris, This ebony enchanting gem echoes in lovers hearts forever. The night has it's own song. My best to you, chuck
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Chris Green
Date: 4/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so very much Chuck for your kind thoughts about my poem.
Date: 4/14/2017 7:50:00 PM
a thoroughly charming poem, chris, with the most perfect ending! just delightful...
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Chris Green
Date: 4/17/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Ilene for all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 4/14/2017 6:19:00 PM
Yes..fairies do exist...Many are pink-winged :) They live in mushroom houses...:).What a beautiful beautiful poem.Such a lovely Easter gift..sweeter than any Easter Chocolate Bunny.Happy Easter..Goodnight...A fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/17/2017 8:25:00 AM
Thank you my sweeter than a chocolate Easter bunny friend. :) I appreciate you kindness always Charmaine. Thank you for making me smile this morning

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