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The part of Madrid I lived nearby:

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the grace of Paris lingering in my thoughts. . . Madrid’s grimy walls As our small group of students entered Madrid, it was an early morning in late January. We had left behind us what has been called the most beautiful city in the world, and I had been so enchanted by our two weeks in Paris with its many scenic attractions that my expectations for a semester in Madrid loomed equally high in my mind. Dismally, however, I watched Madrid’s dirty streets and walls come into view through a window of the train as we arrived at the place where we were taken by bus to the “residencia,” that place we would make our home for the next several months. I would be immersed in the culture of Spain, the country whose language and history I had studied diligently and enthusiastically throughout high school. Though my first impression of Madrid was not a good one, I very quickly adapted to this capital city in the center of of the Castilian plain. My fondness for the entire metropolis increased as I took daily walks to the stores, cafes, museums, parks and other places of amusement or of historical importance. Studying at the residencia was not the real education I was to receive, for the learning was not so much in the books as in the experience of going on excursions nearly every other weekend. We visited many regions of Spain and also of Portugal: the Pyrenees with their gorgeous verdancy, the beaches along the Mediterranean coast, and the vast southern region, La Mancha, where the legendary Don Quixote rode forth on his quest and where a sultan of Granada had built a palace for his many wives. We also enjoyed the burning of a multitude of papier-mâché “fallas” on the street corners of the city of Valencia as well as the colorful spring festival of Seville along with visits to castles, museums and cathedrals too numerous to name. We visited tiny insignificant places such as San Roque when we stayed at a convent before embarking on a small journey across the Strait of Gibraltar into the strange and wondrous land of Morocco. Too many were my experiences to discuss them all here unless I were to write a book! In our small group, some of us were given nicknames. Because I was the one and only student who seemed to be always trying to get everyone to “speak only Spanish” and because I was constantly taking pictures with my trusty Canon camera, I became known as “Miss Spain,” a name which I relished. I and my few closest friends would often wander off onto streets removed from the typical tourist’s route. The photos I took in these places are among my most treasured! uncaptured sounds, flavors and aromas. . . snapping photos In the end, it all came back to Madrid -that central capital city of a nation whose diversity I was able to happily experience for myself in those four short months I so eagerly lapped up. In Madrid I had also met a handsome Madrileño with whom I tried to practice my Spanish, stumbling my way through conversations with his friends and family. In early June, the time came for us to leave that great city. We would visit Rome, Athens and Jerusalem before returning to Paris and then England, our final stop before going back home. Indeed, it was to be the trip of my life, for I can not imagine such an opportunity ever coming my way again! When we left Madrid for our last time in early June, I was on the verge of really “getting” the Spanish language, so I felt heartsick to have to leave so soon. Not one other person in my group seemed to share the melancholy of “Miss Spain” as she sat at the back of the bus looking back at the figure of her boyfriend fading away forever with the streets of Madrid. friends’ happy chatter as the bus pulls away . . . my guy waving bye Aug. 21, 2017 for Deb Guzzi's Haibun Contest

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Date: 9/2/2017 12:02:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your wonderful story; woven with your unique style and eye for detail! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John!
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Date: 8/30/2017 8:30:00 AM
An exceptional experience and beautifully descriptive write. If only we could all have such incredible memories.
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Date: 8/28/2017 7:54:00 AM
Spain is one of the most romantic getaways in the world.... Thank you so much, Andrea for feeding our souls with such beautiful imagery! Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:59:00 PM
Just a wonderful voyage thanks so much for sharing, congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/26/2017 1:54:00 PM
Oh what lovely memories you hold close to your heart, Andrea! I can understand how you felt in Paris, as I also came in close contact with that unique city; I skipped Madrid and opted for Barcelona and the rest of Costa Brava. ~ Congratulations on this winning haibun. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/25/2017 9:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/25/2017 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. I am so happy you got on her list! I was pretty sure mine was not going to, but I am happy Mike got me to write with him. : )
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:41:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win ~*
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:39:00 PM
Enjoyed this lovely write! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 8/25/2017 2:44:00 PM
Hi Andrea, another excellent write. I have never been to Spain but your imagery took me there with you. Such wonderful content. I think you will do well with this one Andrea. This is spellbinding and holds the readers attention right through. Up to your usual high standard Andrea. This goes into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/24/2017 5:34:00 PM
I was hoping you would enter the contest Andrea, the story is brilliant, and the haiku's too, the whole poem tells so much of you,,,you would relish meeting Mandy Tams, she speaks Spanish almost like a native, after all she spends 3 to 4 month a year there...
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Date: 8/23/2017 6:28:00 PM
Wow! Andrea this is a well written haibun. You make me want to go to Madrid. "Miss Spain" what a cool Nick name, do you speak the language fluently now? And the" hottie" who became your spanish teacher and....wow ! That was some trip. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/24/2017 6:00:00 PM
I can carry a conversation pretty well. But I feel I never truly became fluent. My biggest problem is "listening" to movies and stuff!!
Date: 8/23/2017 2:15:00 AM
Your haibun was an exploration in itself Andrea! So well written and entertaining. I am sure yours will do exceptionally well. I really enjoyed every word my friend. I can relate to leaving the boyfriend behind. Lovely! : )
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Date: 8/22/2017 9:06:00 PM
Wow Andrea! Sounds like you would like to go back there again someday. The second Haiku really expresses how you feel. I took Spanish briefly in school, but I never got the hang of it...do you still speak it well? ...ahh lost love...probably just as well to remember them that way. Have great day Andrea :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful Andrea. That last haiku tugs at my heart a little. That must have been hard! It will be hard to beat this haibun in Debbie's contest.
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Date: 8/22/2017 9:19:00 AM
WOW! What a beautiful poem on a beautiful trip Andrea. A memory that will forever be treasured I'm sure :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 6:12:00 AM
I so loved your Haibun my friend! I just wish that I could have been there with you while you were on your travels through Europe! What a fantastic poem, your experiences shine right on through! I don't know if I'll ever leave the US again, but someday I would like to go see Europe! What a brilliant piece, I really enjoyed reading it his morning! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/22/2017 3:53:00 AM
Wonderful memories you've penned down here, Andrea, must have been an amazing trip:)
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Date: 8/22/2017 2:32:00 AM
Loved reading this, great story Andree! I have been to Madrid, so brought back some memories!
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Date: 8/21/2017 8:28:00 PM
What a wonderful vacation, Andrea, I love the last stanza :) good luck in the contest ~*
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Date: 8/21/2017 7:49:00 PM
Awesome. How lucky you were!
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Date: 8/21/2017 7:31:00 PM
WOW, Andrea--what a beautiful journey you depicted here. Having been to some of the places in that region, I can relate to your happy memories.
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Date: 8/21/2017 7:01:00 PM
la despedida es un dolor tan dulce....I can feel the enthusiasm you had on this trip Andrea......muy bien escrito
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:47:00 PM
sounds like it made quite the impression on you, as it should have...I have always said every American need to leave this country to see how the rest of the world lives...the military allowed me to see many countries and find those experiences your poem talked about...Miss Spain...good luck
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/21/2017 6:50:00 PM
yes, I am married to a guy who could not care less about travel. That trip had to sustain me for my life.
Date: 8/21/2017 6:26:00 PM
wow Andrea what an incredible journey and learning experience and it sounds like you embraced life to the full. I felt i was with you every step of the way and your haiku are incredible ! I wonder what happened to your handsome beau... did you keep in touch when you returned home ? hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/21/2017 6:51:00 PM
The guy was Eduardo Collado. A curious thing: I met students back in 2000 who were Mormons (the Mormon community is very small in Madrid and everyone Mormon would have known him). They said around the time I left, he too left the city and nobody knows what became of him. Wish I could scan pictures, I'd put one up of him. He was so handsome, Jan, like a model!!

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