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The Tribute

Their mere weapon was their forbidden courage, hands barren with  no armaments, no ammunitions, marching towards the proud valley of death, dedication born from their sempiternal dreams of a free land. 

Their bare weapon was their incessant patriotism integrated  under a sensitise unique identity of "many in body, one in mind" regardless of microscopic divisions and territories. 

One after another valorous episodes of martyrdoms saline the lifeless pages of chronicles with carotenes  of united echoes of nationalism campaigning for independence. 

Their mere weapon was their dauntless defiance, encapsulated in revolted gestures against servitude as banishment and penalized  death-sentences ruined the rallying cries of revolutionary catchphrases. 

Their mere weapons were their doggedness and grit under the divide and rule's suffocated ambience of authoritarian  sunless sky where life was more traumatic than nightmarish death. 

Their mere weapon was their undefeated dreams when chauvinistic old and young blood were contentedly motioning to expire in the hecatomb of prerogative freedom;  intoning the committed slogan of "Vande Mataram" I praise thee, mother," ardently.

Non-actualised, futile movements after movements were not their impediments, but cheering formidable fortitude  to stay resilient in face  of coercive  subjugation with consolidated resoluteness. 

Their mere weapons were their steadfast unity and integrity in the face of controls and bans; consolidated in the unabated tides of mass participation to resist the holocaust regulations. 
With unprecedented  ubiquitous non-cooperation and boycott widespread, who could restrain the dangling steps parading  towards the gallows to save the sanctity of motherland! 

Their mere weapons were non violence and laudable forbearance  against all odds of vehement intolerances, a rare aplomb to sustain with dignity under any strategic dominance. 

Their mere weapon was their discretionary decisiveness, solidified by prolonged oppressions' distresses, took all the bullets on the audacious-chests gloriously so that a new millennium of amaranthine independence becomes reality. 

From 1847 to 1946, history witnessed a persistent series of spotless sacrifices marked by resiliences' bloodshed  for the sanctified cause under the silhouette sky of alien-jurisdiction's proclaimed, penalized damnation. 

Steadfast fidelity and enduring fortitude created  an immortal era when from the sacrifices' blood bloomed a new dawn of liberty under the independent sky  of justified sovereignty. 

An egalitarian eternal sunrise of a democratic chapter incepted with the viceroy rule broke up at the midnight of 14 th August 1947 marking the end of the seminal moment of perennial despotism, when the proud  nation wake up to  witness the first liberated sunrise at monumental  twilight of 15 th August 1947 with the swearing of  panegyric oration of independence at the Viceregal Lodge of Shimla.

Another acclaimed milestone with sacrifices footprint, auspiciously encrypted in January 26, 1950, when  broke free from the shackles of monarchy into a sovereign republic permanently as the glorious constitution came into effect with the  termination of the dominion status ultimately.

World's largest democracy, India, is going to proudly complete 75 th glorious years of independence on 15 th August 2022.

An honourable salute to all the martyrs who sacrificed everything so that nation can behold the dawn of priceless freedom forever. 

Vande Mataram
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Babcock Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 3:47 PM
A great tribute to your country and countryman. Well written and well said. love phyl
Kalita Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 2:07 AM
Thanks much dear Phyllis. Gratitude
Proxenos Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 7:36 AM
Hi Spilika, a talented eloquent, passionate poet are you my dear friend This tribute to the then oppressed brave people of India by a foreign barbaric monarchy, is heartbreaking. It was with great relief that I read that they became independent in 1947 and Finally freed in 1950 from the shackles of a foreign monarchy which had colonized India a hundred years before. This poem is no other than brilliant and breathtaking Silpika. hugs and blessings. Congratulations on POTW. Jennifer
Kalita Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 2:06 AM
Thanks much dear Jennifer. Your analytical feedback is so special to me. Hugs and blessings
White Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 9:22 AM
Amazing powerful poem, excellent imagery and embellishment, Kelli
Kalita Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thanks much Kelli. I truly appreciate the review
Beaufort Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Silpika, this is a wonderful tribute for the sacrifice so many people made to build a national sense of identity. This is a lesson that many here in the USA could take to heart. While oppression through force is not a reasonable way to subjugate others, the fact that the Indian people could resist and succeed is miraculous. Happy 77 coming up.
Kalita Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thanks much Duke, so beautifully you have written the tragedy of sacrifice and the herald of the new dawn.My heartfelt gratitude
Edmonds  Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 3:24 AM
A marvellous write Silpika, a great tribute to your country - India… well done, Beryl
Kalita Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:07 AM
Thanks much Beryl
Paudyal Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 3:39 AM
Excellent poem. A true account, well done Shilpika
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thank you for the read and the appreciation.
Ray Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 7:58 PM
absolutely incredible tribute to India..... breathtaking length....great job
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thanks much for the read and the excellent feedback
Freie Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 10:23 PM
Dear Silpika, What an incredible poem and tribute to your country. Your knowledge of it's history through the struggles and triumphs is a reflection of your love for your homeland. I wish more people here in America had the same insight and appreciation of our country. Unfortunately, the ancient tactic of divide and conquer is alive and well in the United States. I firmly believe that the only way to escape our inevitable fate is to finally stand together and use one unified voice to make the changes so badly needed. I would love to see the principles inspired by Mr. Gandhi to take hold here and through passive resistance, save us from ourselves. They say history repeats itself. If that's true, may history relive the victories and put us all on the path to freedom. Thank you again for sharing your amazing poem.
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Thank you much for such minute analysis and wonderful feedback. Gratitude
Hoffman Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 2:41 PM
A superb piece of work, Silpika, and a wonderful tribute to your country. Brava!
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Thanks much for the wonderful feedback and the read. Regards
Kiser Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Powerful, moving, this is so dynamically penned. "75 th glorious years of independence" congratulations India! Beautiful and amazing work. Your research is deep and the pen is thought out beautifully.
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Thanks much for such wonderful analysis and feedback
Koven Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Love most all of your poems. India has created a remarkable poetress. Your existential style is very appealing; deep thoughts coming from within.
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:42 AM
Thanks much Allan for the read and the wonderful feedback. Gratitude and regards
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 5:49 PM
This poem should be shared all over your country, wow, awesome! Congratulations on your country's 75th Anniversary of triumph and joy! Also, congratulations on writing probably the most powerful and educational poem that I have ever read! Beautiful!! <3 Freedom, Peace, and many Blessings forever to you and yours SILPIKA <3 ~BJ
Kalita Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 12:16 PM
Thanks much Kelley for your kind words and wonderful review.. warm regards
Romios Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 4:30 PM
Congratulations on your fabulous poem,! Panagiota XXX
Kalita Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 2:16 AM
Thanks much dear Panagiota.. warm greetings and regards
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Silpika, powerful tribute a gift in your spirit. Well penned with deep emotions full of informative history. Congratulations on receiving the a deserving POEM OF THE WEEK. Many blessings my friend
Kalita Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 9:04 PM
Thank you much dear Eve .. warm regards and greetings
Mccann Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 6:21 PM
You remind us, and we really seem to need reminding, of the intensity and dedication it takes to create a government that works! That does make life do-able for its citizens. We sometimes like the circuses and forget about the bread. Elizabeth
Kalita Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 7:24 PM
Thank you much for such reflective analysis.. greetings and regard
Proxenos Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Silpika you are a true poetic patriot for India the motherland you love and are proud of. They risked their all but fearlessly forged forward, they the people proudly and defiantly risked their everything be proud my friend I do understand Congratulations for being honoured with POTW love and hugs Jennifer.
Kalita Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 7:23 PM
Thank you much dear Jennifer, your words are honour... greetings and hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 4:30 PM
Silpika, this is a wonderful tribute to those who gave their all for the freedom of India. Congratulations on a the well deserved honour of poem of the week… Belle
Kalita Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 5:25 PM
Thank you much Belle... Silpika
Anaya Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 4:00 PM
Vande Mataram and happy 75th Independence Day, Silpika, recognition of sacrifices freedom fighters made, that you may breathe in a free country, true patriotism. Congratulations on Poem of the Week!!! I agree totally with Unseeking Seeker ~Anaya
Kalita Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 5:23 PM
Thank you so much Anaya for the spectacular wish and analysis.... Vande Matram
Robertson Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Such a lovely tribute to the freedom of India. Very well done. And thank you for reading my poem
Kalita Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Thank you much Milton... Greetings
Calasibetta Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! A powerful and passionate write! :)Paulette
Kalita Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Thank you much kindly... warm regards
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 4:28 AM
Dear Silpika, your wonderful poem deserves the honor of POTW! You know how much I loved it as I faved it. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Kalita Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 8:37 AM
I don't have words of gratitude dear Connie for your kind appreciation and adding as favorite, please accept my token of gratitude once again, million thanks.... Silpika
Seeker Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 12:11 AM
Vande Mataram and happy 75th Independence Day, Silpika, recognition of sacrifices freedom fighters made, that we breathe in a free country, true patriotism. Congrats on POTW
Kalita Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 1:45 AM
Thank you so much, wish you happy 75th Independence Day .... Jai Hind ...Vande Mataram
Mc Dermott Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 8:55 PM
A well worded poetic tribute to the contribution made by those who sacrificed so much in the cause of national freedom , acknowledged by being awarded Poem of The Week! Congratulations Silpika, such a truly deserved honour.
Kalita Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 8:58 PM
Thank you kindly much for the revered analysis and the wish... Regards
Nicole Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 4:55 PM
"An honourable salute to all the martyrs who sacrificed everything." You're absolutely right. This is deep and powerful, Silpika. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
Kalita Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 8:50 PM
Thank you much dead Brandy for the deep analysis... gratitude and hugs
La France Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Silpika, a powerful and well penned poem and congratulations on receiving the deserving POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings ~Constance
Kalita Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Thank you much dear Constance.... greetings and warm regards
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