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The Trees Await Their Fate

Hush, rest easy, listen and please no more dins, Listen to the whispers of the young autumnal winds, Tantalising and teasing the trees of their annual sins, Down fall the secrets and away they hurriedly scurry, Not wanting to reveal them to no one in a hurry, The young winds sigh and then they slowly abate, For perhaps it knows this year it's simply too late, But with one final smile it knows next year can wait, For the trees give their final shiver and await their fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/26/2016 11:11:00 AM
RICHARD, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT **
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Date: 5/13/2015 7:11:00 AM
Richard, I think this poem is wonderful, so visual and full of deep emotion, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, A Perfect. . . and welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 5/11/2015 4:00:00 PM
In a way, it almost seems that trees have souls! I hate how we are cutting them down left and right in this world. Destroying the ozone layer by not having enough of them to help the world. Good one.
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Date: 5/11/2015 2:38:00 PM
love the personification especially in the final line - lovely season write:-) hugs Jan xx
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