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The Tree in the Woods

The tree in the woods is where my lifeline ties The promise I made until the cardinal dies was etched in stone for memories sake for this burden to carry and this burden to take Across the path through the glades I walk There was a lonely branch once where the cardinal stood And behold I saw the beauty in it Protesting it should stand well and good Upon to me a plead is made to make sure it never falls bear witness to this be it your word and should this tree fall down The man responsible will bear my mark of a sword planted in the ground For no passion has an animal than this cardinal perched When the time comes for it to take flight I dare a man to look away From such a magnificent sight Reviving me from previous nostalgia the bird whispered back to me Guard this tree with your life And wait till my return this tree is the knowledge of good and evil this message would my passion burn to guard this tree with all my being and to love the way it sways under the wind the tree branch flows And the birds who live in it singing remember the promise until you die remember the tree in the woods

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/3/2018 12:47:00 PM
I will remember the tree if only from your poem. Congrats on your Feature. It's breathtaking.
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Date: 9/6/2018 3:32:00 PM
Btw- Welcome to Poetrysoup site :)
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Date: 9/6/2018 3:30:00 PM
What a beautiful poem..I love the cardinal bird so much as well..and all the melodies birds bring...Lovely.
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Date: 9/6/2018 2:08:00 PM
This is a great poem. Really can see myself in this poem next to the tree Great work Zayn
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Date: 9/6/2018 2:02:00 PM
Hello Zayn Muscat, so nice to meet you.The tree in your poem wold be hard to forget. I would always be thinking about this tree. Have a nice day my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 9/6/2018 1:05:00 PM
great poem about nature and living beings so much destruction these days of the beauty of life, thank you,
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