The Tree In Our Heart

Every man’s heart is a terrific tree of desire
It sprout so fast as a mighty meaty briar
Born from the seed of error it grows
With wrath and pride as the trunks it shows.

With nescient roots it spread deep the soil
And suck inane water with rootlets that coil
Spread around the basin, the wish of action
Holding the water that nourishes the motion.

Our tree is full with leaves of envy
Covering the branches of grief in plenty
Sprouts of fear, sprouts from its branches
Making it looks like a lone tree in ranches.

Acts so evil from the past are its vigour
With twigs of anxiety it looks so rigor
Loss of judgement sprigs from its arms
Our tree looks phantom, devoid of charms.

Thirsty for love and thirsty for money
Thirsty for power and thirst so many
Creepers of thirst, twine they surround
Cower the branches and climb from around

Like the Eve of Eden who tasted the fruit
Don’t wait underneath for the forbidden fruit
Cut down the tree and cut down your sorrows
Free your soul and the joy you pampers. 



Submitted on December 22, 2019, for I Am A Tree Poetry Contest sponsored by Delilah Ventura

Honorable Mention in STRAND any form any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/18/2020 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations Janish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Sam...
Date: 1/18/2020 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations on winning HM!;)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Brenda..
Date: 1/16/2020 1:37:00 AM
I really like this poem very much, it's one I would like to read many times
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/16/2020 2:04:00 AM
Thank you Shirley.. I'm honoured..
Date: 12/24/2019 6:54:00 AM
Words of wisdom--in deep thoughts--enjoyed the metaphoric write, Jenish. All the best.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/24/2019 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 12/23/2019 10:25:00 PM
This was very wise. I felt the lines of strength all the way through. Well written, and so true... Ann
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/23/2019 11:48:00 PM
Thank you Ann..
Date: 12/21/2019 10:44:00 PM
Really good one Jen I`m impressed. Very good. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/21/2019 10:59:00 PM
Thank you Gregory.. Your comments are inspiring...
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