Mike Bayles Poet Verse

The Tree and I

a stirring
before words
early light
through window
greenness
first without
form
stillness
of a branch
the moment
the tree and I
are one

Non Dual Awareness Poetry Contest
July 28, 2022

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Valsa George August 27, 2022 at 8:41 PM The unity developing inside is so palpable when the scene and the seer become one. Great poem. Congratulations on your win dear Mike.....

Constance La France August 16, 2022 at 3:33 PM Mike, great poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance

Christuraj Alex August 15, 2022 at 8:43 AM Short and sweet. Full of philosophy. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley August 14, 2022 at 2:41 PM Dear Mike, the contemplative beauty of your poem inspires expanding awareness of unity. Congratulations for your excellent win in Unseeking Seeker’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Rasitha Ranasinghe August 14, 2022 at 8:17 AM Wow! Beautiful piece of work. Congratulations on your win

Unseeking Seeker August 14, 2022 at 2:02 AM Brilliant! Congrats on your podium finish Mike, thanks for sharing

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2022 at 12:13 PM oh wow, you did this contest SO well. Why couldn't I think to do it this way??