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The Transient

Down a prairie road he trudges Kicking up dust in the sultry summer Of a late August sky Many follow with a tune in their heads And carboard in their shoes Shirts soaked with sweat Knarled hands and gaunt faces A hole in their pockets And eyes that stare but do not see Last cigarette tucked behind An ear red and peeling Mosquitoes bite sunburned flesh Throws his leg over the barbed wire A train whistle sounds in the distance Yes, the rail is singing Jump on the train And travel on to nowhere town Maybe a job for a few pennies? A cup of hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/22/2008 9:42:00 AM
Good Poem, especially since Ijust fininshed teaching about the 30's depression. But also wanted to answer your question about "da kine", it is an all purpose word used by locals that speak pidgin in Hawaii. It can be a verb, adjective or noun . In this case it works for rhymming and means generic tourist hotel. Thanks for your kind words, best wishes, ahellas
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Date: 7/21/2008 4:12:00 PM
Well i finally a good poem about hoboes. I can think of two good songs about this theme: "King of the Road" by Roger Miller and "Hobo's Lullaby" by Woody Guthrie. "A cup of hope" is something we all need! Nice work!
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Date: 7/21/2008 5:23:00 AM
Wonderfully visual as if an excerpt from a movie or in fact life. I enjoy your poetry very much. Michael
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