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This poem in its simplicity really, was written ages ago and was inspired from an Alpine Italian song La Strada Ferrata.   Ages ago I was in a choir and this was one of our favorite songs.  My poem is not a translation of the famous Alpine song.

The dark train hurtled head on, in the star-studded night to its projected destination. The train hooted. Sometimes it slowed as a solitary station passed by. Sometimes it flew even though the lines were crossed. The train hooted. Clickety clack, Clickety clack. The hoot hooted in delight as peaks of ecstasy were reached. Until the train arrived. Smoke ejected, engine slowed to a stop. But I assure you, my love, the journey would have been no fun had you not been with me. 7 January 2021

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Date: 1/8/2021 3:41:00 PM
A journey shared can’t be compared to one taken on one’s own. Enjoyed the video, memories of the steam trains came back again.~~ Belle
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Date: 1/7/2021 7:40:00 PM
The video is a lovely companion to this magical poem. With the wonderful imagery and the singing and hooting of the train, I feel as if I actually took the journey. :=)
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Date: 1/7/2021 7:27:00 PM
That's a lovely train journey... I enjoyed it...
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Date: 1/7/2021 4:40:00 PM
Lovely! A companion can make all the difference!
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Date: 1/7/2021 10:08:00 AM
Lovely Victor. And so true. Nothing is really enjoyable if you don't have someone to share it with. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/7/2021 8:38:00 AM
Great visual imagery. I was 15 when I rode on my first train ride. It is always nice to have someone to keep you company while on a trip. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/7/2021 7:21:00 AM
- Sounds like a lovely little travel, Victor ... I only traveled by train once - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2021 6:56:00 AM
A train journey..the old steam train ...with all it's beauty..so well picturized victor. Have a great day ~ Ani
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Date: 1/7/2021 6:26:00 AM
you brought the journey to life with great use of onomatopoeia :-) hugs jan xx I still love to travel on our steam railway it is so romantic:-)
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Date: 1/7/2021 6:14:00 AM
Oh, lovely! great ending, Victor:)
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Date: 1/7/2021 5:56:00 AM
This is a beautiful song in free verse, Victor. Ending is just as beautiful.
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Date: 1/7/2021 5:55:00 AM
Hi Victory, This is such a well-written write. Now I want to hear the the song that inspired you. Thanks for taking us on your journey of love. Excellent job. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/7/2021 7:15:00 AM
I have uploaded my song if you wish to hear it.
Date: 1/7/2021 2:40:00 AM
Nothing beats a train journey, id love to travel on the orient express and like you say its more enjoyable to share that journey with some one. Tom
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Date: 1/7/2021 2:27:00 AM
A wonderful train journey brought to life with you poetic skills my friend. I adore trains, especially steam trains so with delight I hung onto your every word dear Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 1/7/2021 1:59:00 AM
Lovely write. I enjoyed this. Love trains and I'm always impressed with your words. God bless you dear friend
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