The Trail of a Raindrop

Sudden rain brought me under your umbrella for the first time. For the first time you were so close to me with your fragrance. The umbrella was not big enough to cover both of us. A raindrop was trickling down your forehead. I was following it's trail without listening to you. Your words couldn't touch me like the raindrops falling outside. The trail of that raindrop uncovers some secrets for me, your eyes were bluer than I thought and your dimples deeper. I discovered a beauty spot below your left ear lobe. Today,I know about all your beauty spots.... But still now in a rainy day I want to walk with you under the same umbrella. Date:27th May 2012 =============000==============
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Chircop Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 7:46 AM
I love the flow of this poem...Simply beautiful!
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 3:28 PM
yep, this one is still number one!!
Rose  Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:06 AM
Ah, how could I have missed this beauty of a poem. It has all the tenderness of love and life. Have a wonderful day dear kash.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 6:08 PM
a year later and this remains your top poem,Kash. SUre do miss the good times when you were here!!
Fleming Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 4:49 PM
First time I have noticed this poem - It is very, very good! So good in fact that I am quite sure that it could be included in many published books of modern poetry. A real pleasure to read! My best regards, Kash. :) john
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 9:47 PM
and this is STILL your number one poem. Thought i would tell you again
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:15 PM
KASH, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 8:36 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem. Congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:21 AM
a poem of beauty and sensitivity Kash congrats on placing hugs
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 12:33 PM
This poem from so long ago is considered your number one on the Best poems of Kash list! I bet I faved this one long ago! Hey, your email does not work any more, so I am sending you the message I had for you on a soupmail. If I can get it to copy and paste. . Something to ask you!
Vaillancourt Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 7:41 AM
This piece has been written very well. The flow and rhythm are both good, and it was a poem that I enjoyed very much. Really nice job on this one.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 1:23 PM
I am sorry I have been out of the loop for so long, I hope I can back into sync soon but many congratulations on your win Kash
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Kash, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
Anglesey Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Well done. Really enjoyed the flow and lovely images. Sweet romance under that umbrealla. Congrats on your win :)
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 8:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, kash
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:58 PM
awesome win Kash... pd
A   Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Kash, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
Bacha Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Walking in the rain under the same umbrella, extremely a beautiful poem. Congrats. Love Terry xoxo
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:47 PM
I love reading romantic poetry written by a poet who knows how to express ardor in such a genuine way. This is wonderful Kash! Congrats on you win with this beauty! I am faving this too.
Johnson Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 5:03 PM
What a sweet, sensitive poem. I love it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Ober Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 4:19 PM
Very sweet, Kash! Congrats :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 3:09 PM
A charming man! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Sister Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:31 PM
Beautiful. J
Hendricks Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Awwww, sweet. A well-deserved win, for sure. Nice one, Gentle Kash. :)
Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:32 AM
This is really great. I love it and i have enjoyed reading it. Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear friend Kash. Thanks also for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora
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