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The Trail of a Raindrop

Sudden rain brought me under your umbrella for the first time. For the first time you were so close to me with your fragrance. The umbrella was not big enough to cover both of us. A raindrop was trickling down your forehead. I was following it's trail without listening to you. Your words couldn't touch me like the raindrops falling outside. The trail of that raindrop uncovers some secrets for me, your eyes were bluer than I thought and your dimples deeper. I discovered a beauty spot below your left ear lobe. Today,I know about all your beauty spots.... But still now in a rainy day I want to walk with you under the same umbrella. Date:27th May 2012 =============000==============

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Date: 3/19/2022 3:28:00 PM
yep, this one is still number one!!
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Date: 10/1/2018 6:06:00 AM
Ah, how could I have missed this beauty of a poem. It has all the tenderness of love and life. Have a wonderful day dear kash.
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Date: 8/10/2018 6:08:00 PM
a year later and this remains your top poem,Kash. SUre do miss the good times when you were here!!
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Date: 7/30/2017 4:49:00 PM
First time I have noticed this poem - It is very, very good! So good in fact that I am quite sure that it could be included in many published books of modern poetry. A real pleasure to read! My best regards, Kash. :) john
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Date: 3/24/2017 9:47:00 PM
and this is STILL your number one poem. Thought i would tell you again
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Date: 6/11/2015 4:15:00 PM
KASH, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:36:00 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem. Congrats!
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Date: 6/11/2015 4:21:00 AM
a poem of beauty and sensitivity Kash congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 6/20/2014 12:33:00 PM
This poem from so long ago is considered your number one on the Best poems of Kash list! I bet I faved this one long ago! Hey, your email does not work any more, so I am sending you the message I had for you on a soupmail. If I can get it to copy and paste. . Something to ask you!
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Date: 1/22/2014 7:41:00 AM
This piece has been written very well. The flow and rhythm are both good, and it was a poem that I enjoyed very much. Really nice job on this one.
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Date: 10/25/2013 1:23:00 PM
I am sorry I have been out of the loop for so long, I hope I can back into sync soon but many congratulations on your win Kash
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Date: 10/23/2013 12:43:00 PM
Kash, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2013 11:08:00 AM
Well done. Really enjoyed the flow and lovely images. Sweet romance under that umbrealla. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, kash
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Date: 10/22/2013 9:58:00 PM
awesome win Kash... pd
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:29:00 PM
Kash, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
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Date: 4/15/2013 8:02:00 AM
Walking in the rain under the same umbrella, extremely a beautiful poem. Congrats. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 4/14/2013 11:47:00 PM
I love reading romantic poetry written by a poet who knows how to express ardor in such a genuine way. This is wonderful Kash! Congrats on you win with this beauty! I am faving this too.
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Date: 4/14/2013 5:03:00 PM
What a sweet, sensitive poem. I love it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2013 4:19:00 PM
Very sweet, Kash! Congrats :)
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Date: 4/14/2013 3:09:00 PM
A charming man! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2013 1:31:00 PM
Beautiful. J
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Date: 4/14/2013 12:22:00 PM
Awwww, sweet. A well-deserved win, for sure. Nice one, Gentle Kash. :)
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Date: 4/14/2013 11:32:00 AM
This is really great. I love it and i have enjoyed reading it. Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear friend Kash. Thanks also for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:32:00 AM
many congratulations on your double win Kash , first as a fave and now this xx
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