The Tower With Flowers

Near the big tower Were some flowers They were wilted Ready for the litter

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 8/29/2017 4:00:00 PM

I guess things like that happen.Mother nature, you know.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/29/2017 8:17:00 PM

You never know with mother nature. Have a nice evening my friend.

Edwardj Clark

Date: 3/31/2017 2:32:00 PM

Father time catches up with us all but the good news is the Eternal Spring.....thought provoking poem Darlene x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/31/2017 5:25:00 PM

Yes you are right Father time does catch up with us.Thank you for your comment. x

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/17/2017 4:45:00 PM

Very revealing poem, Darlene. There is a cycle to all life ... death being the end of our corporeal existence. Thank God the soul does not consist of flesh and bone. Even in death, the dead flower was useful. Very insightful poem, dear. Love and hugs to you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2017 6:00:00 PM

Hello Freddie,yes there is a cycle of life for humans and plants as well.It is a good thing that the flesh does not consist of and bone flesh. I enjoyed wrotong this poem.

Old Buck

Date: 2/9/2017 1:26:00 PM

Darlene: Your work had me in it's power, then it tilted, the flowers wilted. :o) Thanks for sharing your work with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2017 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Old Buck, I will keep on writing I enjoy writing poetry.My favourite poet is/Robert Frost. He inspires me when I writ my poetry.