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The Tourist

Have I been one among the chain
of those who come to gawk, then strain
to point a finger, poke my nose
into places I don't own?
To claim I understand the pain
that's covered by the winds and rain?

One who awes and talks in rhymes,
without a glance between the lines
A stranger to a sacred shrine
ignoring reverence and the trace
of those who toiled, laid the stones,
to make this place a home?
 
Am I the one who stakes a claim
Who borrows someone's history?
Travels here in tourist clothes,
as if this spot were mine to own...?
Who stirs the dust and tramps the grounds,
hearing nothing, but the sound
of my own ego echoing...

Simply here to frame a spot, quickly take a selfie shot,
to prove to someone back at home
what matters not to them at all
Text someone far, who doesn't care,
that I've been here or there...?

Have I been one?  So far, so near?
Never conscious while I'm here,
of those who struggled long before
The grief, the loss, long overgrown
where someone lived and made a home?

Who leads me to a crooked tree
once planted by a family
to mark a grave.  Perhaps a child,
perhaps a spouse, and all the while
I smile, then carry on my day

Compelled to come....yet, 
I did not own the years that tell
Nor did I own the tears that fell, ...

two hundred years ago?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:29 PM
So pleased to be rereading this excellent poem, Carrie! Well done for placing high in this contest....congratulations:) Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Can't believe I haven't read this gem before Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 7:06 PM
good to read this one again Carrie...congrats
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Fabulous write Carrie, congratulations...
A  Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 2:28 AM
Carrie Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog (MR PERIOD.....) it's another one of my lazy blogs. Luv **SKAT**
A  Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 2:00 AM
Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Carrie!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:25 AM
Wow, so far this is my favorite. Exceptional writing, congratulations.
Nunez Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Deep thoughts expressed in beautifully. Congrats on your POTD, Carrie. Sorry for the late greet, I was not here. hugs!
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 2:29 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ,August 24 Carrie ! - A great poem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 3:49 AM
Hello Carrie!! Most Excellent Write . . . and Congratulations on POTD!! This is a wonderful piece and I really enjoy a poem like this that I consider a "Thinking Person's Poem." All The Best!! Gary
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August 25, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Oh Carrie. This is so full of thought provoking things to contemplate. Many come here and only criticize instead of seeing the beauty. I know the feelings that you express. Wonderfully worded. You speak the truth. Congrats on POTD
Callus Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Carrie! This is the tourist mentality who just pass through, yet later are able to pass photos around and boast: "I was there!". When I go abroad I enjoy mixing with and talking to the locals; they appreciate it and I learn from the experience. // paul
Smith Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Congrats Carrie...very profound...Tim
Nau Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Congrats on the POTD! {:-D
Lamoureux Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 2:17 PM
What an excellent choice for POTD. Congratulations.
Romaine Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Hey Carrie, BIG congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! An absolutely beautiful work of art. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
Williams Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Great and compelling. Great! POD
Konos Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Another WOW WOW for Carrie Richards....Congratulations Poem of the Day....
Haight Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Carrie, stopping back with congratulations on your well-deserved placement for Poem of the Day! It was wonderful to read it again. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 7:34 AM
Words of elegance, life of the past relieved so well, so many that forget about who was here first. Congratulations on Poem of the Day Hugs Eve
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 4:01 AM
Profound! Congratulations you desrve it, dearCarrie!
Leiser Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:48 PM
This poem eloquently shares a haunting and mesmerizing picture of the past and it's struggles, Carrie. Beautifully written:)
Peranteau Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:17 PM
This write is certainly the profound one dear poet, and I must say; for not these rememberances, your art here as well... all would be naught; 'lost'...I being an enthused soul with regard these treasures, find them the pleasure to mine mind's eyne! Just the sight of such reminds me of the perpetual left, even if it comes down to the simple photograph of the such or anywhere near like..I thank you for this vision Carrie! Have a wonderful week...much love, james
Haight Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 6:46 PM
Your poem is so amazing, Carrie. I feel your emotion so strongly that I also got chills. So wonderfully written. I recently visited Ellis Island where my two sets grandparents came through from Italy many years ago. I saw people speedily going through, some not absorbing the displays or listening to the videos, and I was saddened by this because it meant so much to me to be there where my family came to America for a new life. Best wishes for the contest! Fav+7, Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Thank you for sharing your own story, Sandra. I have seen this too....so many times, in so many places. How can one not think of those who struggled so hard, before we were ever here? Thanks for the wonderful comment. :)
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