The Touches That Touch

"The Touches that Touch"

Somewhere between traces and sensations
its the gentle affair, the touches that touch

Diamonds are not what I seek for you already gave
A fur has no place for you are the blanket keeping me warm
When you take me by the hand you are the moon that lights
When you whisper words you are the song that fills my heart

And now I eternally say to you with love
somewhere between traces and sensations
receive my gentle affair, the touches I long to touch

SkyWatcher  -  05-12-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/24/2017 6:39:00 AM
Written with elegance and style Lisa, I really enjoyed this delightful poem. A7++..Maria
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/24/2017 1:21:00 PM
Hi Smiling Maria. Once again, please forgive this short response. Thank you so very much. Have a wonderful afternoon and night. I will see you soon on your page. Stay well.
Date: 5/15/2017 2:08:00 PM
Beauty in every lovely word, love the line, you are a blanket keeping me warm...... I'm going to use those words on my lovely husband! #7
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/15/2017 6:21:00 PM
Good Evening Elizabeth. Thank you so much. How grand is that. Very. Have fun with it. Your review is most generous. Have a wonderful night.
Date: 5/15/2017 9:44:00 AM
It is with light touches that you deeply reach us Lisa; you always know how to make the heart sing and the soul smile:) Amitiés
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/15/2017 12:01:00 PM
Oh my goodness. How beautiful. You are amazing Anne-Marie. Good Afternoon. Thank you so much. Words can not express. I will see you on your page. Have a wonderful afternoon. Amities right back.
Date: 5/15/2017 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful flowers of love ...
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/15/2017 9:16:00 AM
Hello Probir. I hope this day finds you well. Thank you very much. Honestly. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page.
Date: 5/15/2017 7:55:00 AM
Sounds like somebody is in love. Extremely romantic. Lisa:)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/15/2017 9:16:00 AM
Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Aren't you funny. Thank you very much. I hope you enjoyed this entry. Where would the world and we be without love. Have a wonderful day.
Date: 5/15/2017 7:19:00 AM
What Victor and Chris both say. Be a chirpy little wispy bird in a tree, on a breezy spring morning, telling us romantic tales that make me wish for stars, see, and beautiful flowered meadows..... Lovely.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/15/2017 7:31:00 AM
Hello Darren. Now isn't it a lovely day in the neighborhood (lol). Coming from you always reaching the mark with poetic elements I'm honored and graciously say thank you for such generosity and support. -- smile -- May the afternoon go well. I will see you later on your page. Stay well Penguin and thank you again for such a beautiful review.
Date: 5/15/2017 6:28:00 AM
Such a beautiful and wispy feeling poem. This one floats like a soft breeze across my skin and my mind. The feel of love is warm and comforting as your words bring a smile to my face. Your talent continues to shine my friend and it is such a beautiful light. Loved this Lisa.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/15/2017 6:49:00 AM
Hi Chris. Good Morning. Thank you for such generosity and yes for sharing your intake on the entry. Never do I take it lightly. I will always repeat coming from the composer and poet that you are its my hope I'm deserving of such a review. Have a wonderful morning. I will see you on your page.
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