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Gifts of a long life, Graces an abandoned beach, Emptied shells and vanished droves, Gifts I made myself, Faces, an album that stretch, Empty shelves and vessel dreams. Date: 08/28/2019 www.howmnaysyllables.com 577, 577.

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Date: 9/3/2019 3:46:00 PM
William, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this great Sedoka poem and I loved hearing your voice too !
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/3/2019 3:50:00 PM
Ugh! That voice -- the horrors, you are a dear Constance! ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/2/2019 5:39:00 PM
2 lovely sedoka William, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2019 8:03:00 PM
Kindness being your forte ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/2/2019 1:03:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2019 1:07:00 PM
What a treat, thank you, ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/2/2019 12:21:00 PM
I love waiting for turtles in the moonlight. Congratulations on your top placement with your poem.
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Date: 9/2/2019 12:33:00 PM
My grateful thanks indeed, ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/2/2019 11:18:00 AM
William congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 9/2/2019 11:24:00 AM
Thanks, so kind of you ~ Aloha always William

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