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The Tornado

The tremendous trembling
troubling thrashing terror
trees tipped, torn then tossed
Tornado tracked toward trail.

Trampling, transforming
telegraphing thoughts 
totally teased time
turning today to tomorrow.

Thinking this tale
tells the tragic turmoil
took tolls, turned themes
that transfixed tranquility.

Then Tuesday told 
theocratic terrible topics
thus totally tearing 
thy tender topography.

Copyright © Carl Jent | Year Posted 2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/26/2018 12:16:00 PM Tornado makes a mess of mother nature's beauty. Homeless people and more. So sad. Have anice day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/28/2018 2:21:00 PM It is nice to meet you. Carl Jent Date: 1/26/2018 2:06:00 PM yes the tornado can make a mess. This is one of my first alteration attempts, it made quite a mess too. Thanks for the comment and you too have a nice day. Carl 'Wayne' Jent

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/4/2017 11:32:00 AM Awesome :) Login to Reply Carl Jent Date: 12/4/2017 11:35:00 AM Thanks Maureen, that's a poem I wrote a few months ago. I had to edit the poem for a contest. Thanks for the comment. Wayne Carl Jent Date: 12/4/2017 11:35:00 AM Thanks Maureen, that's a poem I wrote a few months ago. I had to edit the poem for a contest. Thanks for the comment. Wayne