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The Tombstone

It was simply an old rusty tractor An eyesore for passers by A graveyard, at the back, of a pasture All covered with weeds and vines Curiously, on slow approach, I wanted a closer look Carefully climbed the barbed wire fence Hopping over a weed wild brook What once had been paint was flaked and gray Oxidized and turning brown Left to die, to bake in the sun And weather back into the ground Some of it's parts were stripped away Others hanging by wires The steering wheel and seat had strayed Yet four worn out flattened tires Days of use had long since passed The weather had taken it's toll A necessity which was built to last Still standing and left alone But to me it stood for something more It stood for time and growth Shiny and new a dream of yore Some family's lives and hopes How times have changed lives been sustained The wind and dust have swirled With growth of crops, growth of a country The growth of a starving world Though time had been unkind to it Now a tombstone out in the clear As I rubbed the rust from the relic's side Engraved was the name John Deere An original poem by "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/5/2023 8:25:00 AM
Symbolic, isn’t it! Beautiful!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/5/2023 8:28:00 AM
Thank you, Maggie:)
Date: 2/2/2016 8:14:00 AM
Nice!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
I'm flattered. Thank you. Please come back anytime, I'll try to make you smile or think or both.
Date: 1/30/2016 10:29:00 PM
Elegant tribute to past times, farm life and John Deere tractors. Farm I was raised on had nothing but John Deere tractors. Great work horses they were! Great poem my friend. A7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 10:37:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 1/30/2016 9:31:00 PM
You brought me back to my grandparents farm. I love all the detail and these three lines in particular: "Oxidized and turning brown / Left to die, to bake in the sun / And weather back into the ground. Many thanks for reading my work, Daniel. / M
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 9:33:00 PM
I will always read your work, Maurice. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment as I value your opinion.
Date: 1/30/2016 9:13:00 PM
You've amassed a fan base and it's not too hard to see why, exquisite as always! Those publishing dreams should be getting a little less scary with that kind of support!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thank you again my dear. Your words are refreshing and inspiring. People are going to start to talk.
Date: 1/30/2016 4:27:00 PM
You saw something which in your eyes was still standing proud... the descriptions of the tractor are richly expressive, revealing the everlasting name of John Deere and vividly real. Well done Daniel! Great writing!! Best wishes, Keith
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 4:45:00 PM
Your sharp insight and words of support and encouragement are a never ending inspiration. Thank you my friend. Until next time. I say adieu.
Date: 1/30/2016 3:02:00 PM
I am quite familiar with John Deere. Beautiful write Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Kelli. I am flattered. Thanks for reading and the supporting comments.
Date: 1/30/2016 2:36:00 PM
Your nostalgic poem brings the memory of my childhood days on our farm. I learned to drive on a tractor when I was 10... what fun days. Your rhyme scheme is perfect, Daniel!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. coming from you, makes my cheeks turn red and my heart is smiling. I really appreciate the flowers.
Date: 1/30/2016 1:59:00 PM
Amazing! Loved it.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Kaitlyn. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 1:59:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment and especially for the 7.
Date: 1/30/2016 1:53:00 PM
A well written story Daniel..enjoyed...a 7...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 2:11:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I really appreciate the 7 and for you taking the time to read and comment

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