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The Tire Swing

A tire swing hanging from a willow tree barely swaying to and fro my small feet sweep and kick up dirt on the ground beneath and below. Under a cold damp gray sky safety is found here in the yard from the darkness of the house and the many things I want to forget and discard. As the rope holds my weight my little mind is lost too young to grasp the damage or understand the cost. I am the master of holding back tears a lump keeps words from escaping I scream silently inside keeping my thoughts from shaping. Slowly the motion rocks my fear to sleep and I come back to where I came imagination takes over burying sad places in my little frame. My thoughts set free to run with wonder oh how I love this tree that I'm under. Peace found while floating in a soft rubber tire dark soul lit again twirling under and higher and higher. Like scars that fade but never go away rope has left a mark still Imprinted on the tree limb In that yard today. 7/20/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/14/2015 2:42:00 PM
Very nice! Especially last stanza.
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Date: 7/29/2015 2:41:00 PM
You took me back on the swing poem, good subject with your special twist included. Good job. Also reminded me of one I wrote.
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Date: 7/29/2015 2:36:00 PM
Our youth experiences do put a mark on us and mostly we will always have an imprint there..I hope that it is a good positive imprint..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:53:00 PM
this is absolutely wonderful. I see congrats to you below. Was it in one of those Best poem type contests? oh, wait I see you got POTD!!! Congratulations. This one surely deserved it.
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Date: 7/25/2015 7:27:00 PM
Lee, congratulations on your placement with this beautiful write and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:11:00 PM
Nice poem Lee
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:38:00 AM
It sounds like the tree was a friend that saved you in its quiet way. How beautifully you have expressed this poetic story. I can see why it was selected POTD! Congratulations Lee!
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Date: 7/22/2015 2:39:00 PM
So much emotions you arouse here.. the actions and tragedy that is here.. descriptive!! Message is also pack!! Congratz!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/22/2015 10:26:00 AM
This is a masterfully subtle presentation of the dark depth from where this child is currently buried under. Some form of abuse surely. The last verse aptly calls attention of the damage already done, never to be removed from her person. No wonder this got the POTD! Happy for you, Lee. Congratulations! hugs!
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Date: 7/22/2015 8:54:00 AM
Lee a big congratulations on having this beautiful poem selected as Poem of the Day, so deserving, enjoy the honor
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thank you BW : ) I appreciate you and all your words and visits ~ lee
Date: 7/22/2015 8:40:00 AM
Children or little angels blessed with emotions like adults they still understand what is going around them. Hugs and congratulations on poem of the day
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Date: 7/22/2015 9:55:00 AM
Yes ...sometimes they understand better than adults : ) Thank you Eve for the congratulations! ~ lee
Date: 7/22/2015 8:14:00 AM
I know this is for my contest so I'm not going to read it yet...but I do want to congratulate you on it being featured as poem of the day :)
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Casarsh... Very freeing to "get low" Your contest will help a few ease the pain of some demons I'm sure : ) ~ lee
Date: 7/22/2015 8:04:00 AM
Wonderful poem... enjoyed the swing of emotions. Loved it... Bobby
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 9:46:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed my poem Anindya thank you! ~ lee
Date: 7/22/2015 7:20:00 AM
Lee, this is a deep emotional piece. I felt pain and joy as I was reading your heartfelt write. The joy came from seeing that the tire swing brought peace(safe haven)in the midst of so much darkness.Congratulations on getting the poem of the day it was well deserved.Good luck in the contest. :)Alexis(7)
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 9:45:00 AM
Thank you for your congratulations Alexis ~ lee
Date: 7/22/2015 4:08:00 AM
- Lee, Congratulations on a great poem: P. O. T. D. - //Anne-Lise :)
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Anne ... I was nice surprise : )
Date: 7/21/2015 10:42:00 PM
Very deep and so well crafted. Adding this gem to my fav list and thanks. A7
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 1:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Robert! For your support and your kind words!
Date: 7/21/2015 8:17:00 PM
A great write, full of hidden, dark meanings. It's sure to do well in the contest. Best of luck. A 7. ~~Darlene
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 1:19:00 AM
Darlene thank you for your support I appreciate your kind words! ~ lee
Date: 7/21/2015 5:14:00 PM
A deep memory from the " hangin tree"...and thanks for the comment...Peter
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 1:17:00 AM
: ) ... Thank you Mr. Holmes!
Date: 7/21/2015 3:15:00 PM
Eve, a moving and emotional write, I felt the pain in each word, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances ...
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 1:16:00 AM
Thank you BW I appreciate your support : )
Date: 7/21/2015 3:05:00 PM
A deep write with melancholy overtones Lee... best wishes
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/22/2015 1:15:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 7/21/2015 9:00:00 AM
Evocative write, so well done. Julia
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/21/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thank you for reading and for the kind words Julia : ) ~ lee

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