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The Time of My Miracle

I was only five and barely alive; diagnosed with a dreaded disease; For six months I lay in a hospital bed not quite ready to leave. My kidneys had failed; medications were no avail; dialysis seemed the only treatment. Then a miracle occurred; I know it’s absurd, because they don’t really happen too frequent. Every morning I wasn’t dead the doctors scratched their heads wondering how I was hanging on - And slowly but surely I started to heal until the disease, somehow, was gone. I was written about in the medical journals as an unsolved mystery; That time in my life – even as young as I was - is my most significant history. Not many of us can remember our lives when we were only five years old – But I am here to tell, I remember it well; and often my story I’ve told. A special bond had formed between my father and me who visited me every day; While my mother stayed home taking care of my five siblings with one more sister on the way. I write many poems of pure fiction but I assure you this story is true; I was five years old, when my parents were told soon my life would be through. This year, I turn 54 and have never had any kidney problems since. Written and posted by Joe Flach on 1/8/2012 for Nette Onclauds, "...At This Age" contest.

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Date: 1/16/2012 1:04:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Nette's "At This Age" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2012 11:53:00 AM
CONGRATS JOE ON ANOTHER FIRST PLACE WIN.. A TREASURED PIECE ..
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Date: 1/14/2012 6:47:00 AM
Yes it was a miracle.Congratulations Joe on your first place win in Nette's contest.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/14/2012 2:19:00 AM
Joe congrats on your win, I for one am delighted you survived otherwise we would be short of one great poet..David
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Date: 1/13/2012 10:57:00 PM
wow, we are a lot alike here!!(except I don't think I was as close to death as you were.) I am only a few years older than you I guess and when I was five I was over a month in a hospital with pnemonia!! (no lung problems since) Congratulations on your BIG win, Joe. well deserved.
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:05:00 PM
Joe, this is both an amazing recount of your youth and a fantastic poem. Congrats on the win. Your high honours are well deserved. Miracles, do indeed, happen! I feel like this could be rewritten as a first chapter to a biography. Has the rest of your life been touched by grace, surprises, mystery? Smiles from Cyndi
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:10:00 PM
What experiences you have had Joe, fine write and another fine win. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2012 4:47:00 PM
So glad I didn't miss this one! There are some things that have no explanation, except to say "miracle" ! Wow!!
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:13:00 AM
A great testimony to share! Thank you!
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:31:00 PM
I agree with Kim. This is an amazing story. You have also told it well with some good rhyming. I'm glad you are still around, and I am sure you have many others that feel the same way.
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:30:00 PM
An amazing story. So glad you shared it, Joe. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/8/2012 7:52:00 PM
wonderful news- is this really true? Brenda : )
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Joe Flach
Date: 1/8/2012 8:02:00 PM
Yes, Brenda, this is a true story. I have written about it a few times. My favorite one posted here on soup is "At Top of the Stairwell" - check it out, if you have the time and inclination.

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