The Tidings of Fall

There a movement in the trees
The goings of an autumn breeze
Tickling leaves of red and gold
Making hot summer into winter cold
And in the air there goes a wisp
Of smoke riding on air so crisp
Of days to come this is a sign
Of seasons change and change in time
For heavy coats and fire bright
New stars to see up in the night
But at this time before the snows
It's falls turn now to put on a show
First one tree and then the next
A show so striking so complex
And looking up the sky so blue
But this is nothing compared to You
A glimpse of Heaven for us to see
A hint to us Your great beauty
But as for now we'll stand amazed
Of wondrous things that You have made
Winter's coming and summer's gone
And fall won't be here very long
Now out the window look alas
Night has come so very fast
Time to sleep but again we'll see
In the morn this great beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/5/2012 7:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Janette Fisher's sponsored contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2012 5:39:00 PM
Fall at its best is wonderful as you so descriptively say. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:05:00 PM
Daniel, can;t wait to see the beauty, congratulations with your awesome win,, always~pd
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Date: 11/30/2012 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel xx
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Date: 11/6/2012 1:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this descriptive and expressive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/5/2012 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2012 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Daniel xx
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Date: 11/3/2012 9:48:00 PM
a great fall poem and tribute to the maker! Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 11/3/2012 7:33:00 PM
Very lovely and a tribute the Father for his beautiful gifts. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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