The Tides of Time

Upon the swirling tides of time,
For want of reason and of rhyme,
A soul is taken by the flood,
Its vessel made of flesh and blood.

He sails with youthful innocence,
On seas of inexperience,
To be the master of his fate,
His fledgling spirit cannot wait.

And so the tides begin to teem,
As torrents soon replace the stream.
While innocence receives its knocks,
His youth is dashed upon the rocks.

Though flesh is torn and sinews strained,
Wisdom is learned and prudence gained.
And as the tides outrun the past,
His innocence is gone at last.

He rides the current to the sea,
His thoughts filled with uncertainty.
Though new adventures, there, await,
He's not the master of his fate.

Amid the songs of cherubim,
He sees the twilight skies grow dim.
Then bathed in holy light, sublime;
He's lifted from the tides of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/27/2011 6:03:00 PM
Thank you very much my friends.
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:26:00 PM
Brother that was epic!
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:27:00 PM
I have to welcome you to this site as well. I know you're going to like it here. Keep displaying impressive writings like this one, and you are bound to become very popular.
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Date: 2/12/2011 3:45:00 PM
This is very well done the way you kept the subject in focus...I really liked this one. goodluck julie
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Date: 2/9/2011 12:12:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Mark. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 12:31:00 PM
Wow, That was GREAT!!! incredible rhyme and it flowed even better than the tide. Not to mention the story's progression. Just Perfect
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