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The Tide Was Rough

I thank thee lord for lifting us in your arms when the tide was rough Tidal waves swept away our loved ones to your celestial heavens I thank thee lord for lifting us in your arms when the tide was rough You helped us to face the scouring realities by making us tough Life could have been worse, but you saved us from its denizens Fill my cup with more strength for I know the challenges are never enough I thank thee lord for lifting us in your arms when the tide was rough Rondelet-Refrain in line 1, 3, 7 Rhyme-a,b,a,a,b,b,a January 3, 2016 Contest: Giving Thanks For 2015 Sponsor: Carol Eastman

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Date: 1/26/2016 8:44:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your Giving Thanks, WIN.... LINDA ....
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/13/2016 6:20:00 PM
BALVEEN Congratulations on your 2015 win. Hus ** SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 1/3/2016 5:05:00 PM
Oh, at first I thought this was triolet. It's a great form for this contest entry. Good luck!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 10:37:00 AM
Glad you liked it Andrea!