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The Ticking of Time

Love turns time of Spring, Flowers to bloom and feminine rhyme on the ground. Tree blossoms providing pollen to call on Butterflies and hummingbirds flit around So profound sweet nectar and the bees to crawl upon the ticking of time. Love turns time of the World, Clouds rain beating in echoing sound of its master. Blossoming trees providing shade that's never forgotten To touch her fire within hearth flames, beating faster, Begotten seeds by universal earth and heaven, the ticking of time. Love turns time existence, Sun shining a world of healing sweet warm love. A faint feeling that exists like a lightning rod. True love from up above from our Divine God Spiced with rhythm and rhyme, of life love and affection, the ticking of time. 3/5/2024

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Date: 3/11/2024 6:09:00 PM
Just beautiful, Eve. Congratulations on your wind.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/11/2024 6:11:00 PM
Oops -- that should be WIN!
Date: 3/10/2024 1:39:00 PM
So very beautiful Eve! Loved it….Debx
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Date: 3/10/2024 12:24:00 PM
Eve, your writing style is so graceful.
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Date: 3/9/2024 10:54:00 AM
- Back with a heartwarming congratulations on your top winning poem, dear Eve - A worthy winning poem ... really beautiful :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/9/2024 3:09:00 AM
Hi Eve, hope you are well my friend, I like your title, for every moment, every second every minute, every hour that passes, we will never see again. Huge congratulations on your win. Awesome poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/8/2024 9:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Eve!
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Date: 3/8/2024 8:24:00 PM
Eve, your poem is so positive--in its images and message conveyed. Janice
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Date: 3/8/2024 9:30:00 AM
Dear eve, this is so beautiful, I absolutely love the descriptive manner youv woven words and painted imagery to depict time and how it keeps fleeting. Your opening lines especially drew me in; words of an artistic soul! And i love also how youv written “ To touch her fire within hearth flames, beating faster, Begotten seeds by universal earth and heaven the ticking of time.” Impeccable! Pleasure reading this evocative and soft yet powerful write! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Fave
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Date: 3/6/2024 6:38:00 AM
Dear Eve, This is a beautiful ode to the cyclical nature of love and existence. Your words create a picture of the seasons of life, from the blossoming of flowers in spring to the warmth of the sun's love. Your imagery evokes a sense of wonder and appreciation for the passage of time. This is a heartfelt reflection on the eternal rhythms of love and life. - Blessings Daniel
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Date: 3/6/2024 3:36:00 AM
- A time of beauty and love ... beautiful poem, Eve :) - hugs
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