Eve Roper Poet Free verse

The Ticking of Time

Love turns time of Spring,

Flowers to bloom and feminine rhyme on the ground.
Tree blossoms providing pollen to call on
Butterflies and hummingbirds flit around
So profound sweet nectar and the bees to crawl upon
      the ticking of time.

Love turns time of the World,

Clouds rain beating in echoing sound of its master.
Blossoming trees providing shade that's never forgotten
To touch her fire within hearth flames, beating faster,
Begotten seeds by universal earth and heaven,
      the ticking of time.

Love turns time existence,

Sun shining a world of healing sweet warm love.
A faint feeling that exists like a lightning rod.
True love from up above from our Divine God
Spiced with rhythm and rhyme, of life love and affection,
      the ticking of time.


3/5/2024

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Ann Peck March 11, 2024 at 6:09 PM Just beautiful, Eve. Congratulations on your wind. Ann Peck March 11, 2024 at 6:11 PM Oops -- that should be WIN!

Deb M March 10, 2024 at 1:39 PM So very beautiful Eve! Loved it….Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2024 at 10:54 AM - Back with a heartwarming congratulations on your top winning poem, dear Eve - A worthy winning poem ... really beautiful :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos March 9, 2024 at 3:09 AM Hi Eve, hope you are well my friend, I like your title, for every moment, every second every minute, every hour that passes, we will never see again. Huge congratulations on your win. Awesome poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Karen Jones March 8, 2024 at 9:43 PM Congratulations on your first place win Eve!

Janice Canerdy March 8, 2024 at 8:24 PM Eve, your poem is so positive--in its images and message conveyed. Janice

Ink Empress March 8, 2024 at 9:30 AM Dear eve, this is so beautiful, I absolutely love the descriptive manner youv woven words and painted imagery to depict time and how it keeps fleeting. Your opening lines especially drew me in; words of an artistic soul! And i love also how youv written “ To touch her fire within hearth flames, beating faster, Begotten seeds by universal earth and heaven the ticking of time.” Impeccable! Pleasure reading this evocative and soft yet powerful write! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Fave

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 6, 2024 at 6:38 AM Dear Eve, This is a beautiful ode to the cyclical nature of love and existence. Your words create a picture of the seasons of life, from the blossoming of flowers in spring to the warmth of the sun's love. Your imagery evokes a sense of wonder and appreciation for the passage of time. This is a heartfelt reflection on the eternal rhythms of love and life. - Blessings Daniel

Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2024 at 3:36 AM - A time of beauty and love ... beautiful poem, Eve :) - hugs