Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

The Thrill Was Gone-For Contest

Old Paddy wanted to have a last fling
But quite unresponsive was his old “thing”
He takes a small pill
To get back the thrill
He’s not expected to last until spring



2/19/16

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 12:10 AM Barbara, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi March 7, 2016 at 5:28 AM Hi Barbara. Congrats for your wonderful WIN with this awesome poem!!! ;-) Thanks for commenting on my poem "Oppressive Orange" *^_^*

John Lawless March 6, 2016 at 9:03 PM A bottle of Guinness and a Viagra....he'll be pushing up the daisy's

Susan Gentry March 6, 2016 at 7:51 PM Lol! Cute... Congratulations on your win! :)

Janice Canerdy March 6, 2016 at 7:24 PM Barbara, congratulations on your win! Janice

Sarita Milliner March 6, 2016 at 7:24 PM Ha, Ha, Ha!! Congratulations on your win Barbara!!

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 7:20 PM so glad to see this one near the top. congrats.

Eve Roper March 6, 2016 at 6:38 PM this is so funny, congratulations on you win.:)

Eve Roper March 6, 2016 at 6:38 PM this is so funny, congratulations on you win.:)

Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 5:55 PM Really made me smile Barbara congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 29, 2016 at 4:04 PM this is really cute, Barbara. I likes it MUCHO

Sara Kendrick February 24, 2016 at 9:32 AM Got a chuckle..Sara

John Lawless February 20, 2016 at 10:33 AM At least he goes out with a BANG, not a WHIMPER.....good one Barbara

CayCay Godwin February 20, 2016 at 6:10 AM Very cute! CayCay

Daniel Turner February 19, 2016 at 3:35 PM Made me laugh! Very funny, Barbara. Peace:)

Abdul Malik Mandani February 19, 2016 at 2:52 PM Pardon me Barbara, Your Limerick inspired me to write one too. Hope you don't mind.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2016 at 1:56 PM :)))) .... :)))))..... good one, Barbara :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)