Aditi Mishra Poet Sonnet

The Thorn's Song Ct

I smiled when lilac tulip bloomed,
I prayed for amber wings in rain.
On fiery leaves with love perfumed,
blue angels kissed her blushing chain.

How oft fir-kissed drops fall as gems
absorbing pangs of thirst from stems.
My bare soul drenched in velvet chrome
longs to rest in her musk-soaked home.

When lilac tulip bloomed, I prayed,
I smiled for amber wings in rain.
With love, perfumed blue angels kissed
her blushing chain on fiery leaves.

Afar, yet my love sings along
if only she'd hear a thorn's song.


September 2, 2020

Charonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: charles messina

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Beata Agustin September 4, 2024 at 9:53 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 12, 2021 at 1:00 AM beautiful and may I thank you for visiting and commenting on my work, it is much appreciated.

Mark Koplin October 14, 2020 at 11:53 AM Very Lovely, Congrats on your top place finish!

Sam Kauffman October 13, 2020 at 10:00 AM Congratulations on your first place win, Aditi.

Jan Allison October 13, 2020 at 9:10 AM what superb imagery Aditi, Many congrats on your first place win:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina October 13, 2020 at 8:58 AM Aditi, this is such a beautiful poem. You did well with this very difficult form. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. I hope all is well. Charlie

Paula Goldsmith October 13, 2020 at 8:51 AM Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" This should be a painting. Know anyone that could paint it for you?????? Enjoy your win.........................

Jo Chamberlain October 13, 2020 at 8:03 AM Beautiful poem, congratulations on your win. :-)

Connie Marcum Wong September 17, 2020 at 1:13 AM This poem is stunning Aditi. Your poetry is always so uniquely beautiful. This is sure to be a winner! Blessings xxoo

Rashi Soni September 12, 2020 at 2:23 AM Beautiful poem Aditi. I really liked it. Rashi

John Watt September 3, 2020 at 5:55 PM I like your premise of a thorn singing to a flower. Challenging sonnet form you followed the constraints very well. I smell a winner! God bless ~ John