The Thorn's Song Ct

I smiled when lilac tulip bloomed, I prayed for amber wings in rain. On fiery leaves with love perfumed, blue angels kissed her blushing chain. How oft fir-kissed drops fall as gems absorbing pangs of thirst from stems. My bare soul drenched in velvet chrome longs to rest in her musk-soaked home. When lilac tulip bloomed, I prayed, I smiled for amber wings in rain. With love, perfumed blue angels kissed her blushing chain on fiery leaves. Afar, yet my love sings along if only she'd hear a thorn's song. September 2, 2020 Charonnet Poetry Contest Sponsor: charles messina

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Date: 9/4/2024 9:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/12/2021 1:00:00 AM
beautiful and may I thank you for visiting and commenting on my work, it is much appreciated.
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Date: 10/14/2020 11:53:00 AM
Very Lovely, Congrats on your top place finish!
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Date: 10/13/2020 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Aditi.
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:10:00 AM
what superb imagery Aditi, Many congrats on your first place win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2020 8:58:00 AM
Aditi, this is such a beautiful poem. You did well with this very difficult form. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. I hope all is well. Charlie
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Date: 10/13/2020 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" This should be a painting. Know anyone that could paint it for you?????? Enjoy your win.........................
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Date: 10/13/2020 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem, congratulations on your win. :-)
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Date: 9/17/2020 1:13:00 AM
This poem is stunning Aditi. Your poetry is always so uniquely beautiful. This is sure to be a winner! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 9/12/2020 2:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem Aditi. I really liked it. Rashi
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Date: 9/3/2020 5:55:00 PM
I like your premise of a thorn singing to a flower. Challenging sonnet form you followed the constraints very well. I smell a winner! God bless ~ John
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