The Thirst

Cracked lips and dead deserted eyes
The gait of my walk will not decide
One way or several shattered minds
I carry these creatures due to their designs

Absence of water keeps me still
The passion I am will not distil
Patience for everything that kills
The beat of my heart is set on thrill

This path a forest I can’t see
The smell of what was in the silent trees
No less a burden that I breathe
I beg for the dead to set me free

Betrayal satisfied by pain
The contract of self signed in the rain
My love is sounding more insane
When this downpour of lust commends your game

Awaken hearts that sit so still
The passionate creatures that feed the thrill
A thirst for lust that knows no lie
The creatures of self together in mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Tj Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Freaking awsome! This is writing. The whole poem from the first taste to the last drop, was intense! See, THIS is why I came here.
Jordan Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 2:39 PM
A very interesting poem that flowed and rhymed very well - enjoyed the read -
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